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DWELLER OF OUR HEART

DWELLER OF OUR HEART ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Poem written for and submitted to “Dweller of Our Heart Poetry Contest,” Unseeking Seeker, sponsor, August 3, 2025 Line of Inquiry: “the essence in us is the same as the essence of the sun Sunrise: Standing on the cliffs and looking onto the horizon I watch the sun melt like a promise Closing my eyes and taking in the warmth, I feel the pulse of light, a vibration stirring my thoughts: What is the sun but a promise, a blazing heart that beats for all? What am I but a similar *promise, a possibility in God’s plan? What is God but a promise, a pulsation connecting us all? I feel His heartbeat, the pulse, of the ancient and divine. I share the same flame as the sun, that essence binding me to Him. Therefore, I am the sun, and the sun is in me, a celestial mirror, a holy unity. My spirit rises, a luminous thread binding me to the universe. My heart, now a flaming orb, shines light into the darkness illuminating my path and showing me the way. Afternoon: The day lengthens; I ascend like the sun with a pulsating heartbeat, the divine within my soul. *Note: “I am a promise, I am a possibility,” title and words of a popular Christian hymn written and produced in 1975, Bill and Gloria Gaither, songwriters.
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Kauffman Avatar
August 16, 2025 at 10:41 AM
Back with congratulations, Sara. Your beautiful poem that literally sings like "the divine within my soul!" Blessings dear friend. May your song go on "in endless song."
Daniels Avatar
August 15, 2025 at 11:30 PM
Congrats Sara, Poetic friend on your placement. Your poem is filled with delicacy & sheen. I enjoyed the way you integrated the hymn into the gift presented here. Sending love.
Kauffman Avatar
August 7, 2025 at 2:25 PM
Hi Sara! What a truly beautiful expression of creation and how everything is intertwined through the work of God's hands. Just lovely! Sending you blessings of light and summer warmth!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 7, 2025 at 5:13 PM
thanks for visiting and commenting, Sam. I do so appreciate your positive comments. Have a blessed evening, Sara
Woods Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 4:23 AM
Oh nice! I love how you expressed this truth. I've been writing about the correlation between God and the sun lately too! God's light shown before the sun, is the title of a song i recently wrote. This beautifully written poem should place high in the contest! Best of luck! Xo
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 4:57 PM
Crystol -- your comments lifted me up! I appreciate your understanding of my poem. I bet your song is outstanding. Perhaps you can post it sometime...would love to read/hear it. Have a splendid evening and thanks for your consistent visits, hugs, Sara
Baker Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 6:38 PM
Thanks for sharing your thoughts through your poetry, Sara. Nice entry for the contest ... good luck! Bill
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 4:56 PM
thank you, hubby. Du bist der Best, hugs, me
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