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Gossamer in Grey - Hiku 31 -

Written: August 02, 2025, for contest by Brian Strand ********************** e r g o phobia g~n~a~w~s m t s a f l e i i r r o a e pshod d d g s s m r in M o n d a y p a l * * * e l*i*g*h*t <|> * * *

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Date: 8/3/2025 5:01:00 AM
Cleverly constructed! :) john
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Date: 8/2/2025 4:51:00 PM
well done, Sir! The first line grabbed my attention...ergophobia gnaws. !!! wishing you a pleasant evening, Sara
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Date: 8/2/2025 2:35:00 PM
A haunting haiku truly.
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Date: 8/2/2025 12:38:00 PM
Fantastic haiku. It captures the essence. Nice graphics.
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Date: 8/2/2025 8:17:00 AM
I used to feel this way on Mondays. Now I work only Tuesday till Thursday so I no longer hate Mondays! Fun read
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Date: 8/2/2025 3:34:00 AM
After the relaxed weekend, the thought of going to work on Mondays makes some people so vexed and anxious, especially those who find their work taxing and laborsome. Great graphic representation and great haiku. All the Best, dear Lasaad.
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