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Dusty Dust

Poor pygmy dust how long would you hide?
                                        Every side your brethren never died


                                        Possessed the wand of lady fairy
                                         If the mood of weather is rainy


                                    Sweet in every foot who touched its cheek
                                  Approach the French kiss, feet drowned by trick


                                          Really often ignore the dust's use
                                            But without it truly no soil use


                                           My friend dusty dust I'm insecure
                                          Your freedom to live always secure

Copyright © Elai Cee | Year Posted 2013

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Terry O'Leary Date: 12/12/2015 1:57:00 PM Amusing creation... wonderful read!!! Login to Reply

Cona Adams Date: 4/13/2015 8:04:00 AM The couplet is one of my favorite forms. Welcome back to poetry soup, Elai Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 6/23/2013 10:41:00 AM Wonderful creation. Loved always, bl Login to Reply Elai Cee Date: 6/25/2013 8:44:00 AM thanks BL

Mustapha Mohammed Date: 6/15/2013 2:56:00 AM Cleverly penned dear Elai,you draw me in with your wonderful thoughts. :) Login to Reply Elai Cee Date: 6/15/2013 3:08:00 AM thanks for the visit ! appreciate ur comment

Mario De Paz Date: 6/12/2013 10:13:00 AM Good fantasy indeed. I wouldn't ever imagined to write or read a poem on poor pygmy dust, and so good Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/12/2013 8:24:00 AM What a great title as well. Great job. Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/11/2013 9:04:00 PM clever. Elai, the 3rd couplet had me wondering, then i reached in and found the imagery. an interesting poem. Thank you for sharing,.... xox~ LINDA Login to Reply Elai Cee Date: 6/12/2013 7:35:00 AM thanks beautiful Linda!

Arthur Vaso Date: 6/6/2013 11:44:00 PM Lovely!! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/6/2013 6:33:00 PM that is so sure, its freedom is always secure. A most interesting topic to write on!! Login to Reply

Omotosho Seth Date: 6/6/2013 3:59:00 PM This poem is rich in emotion, acompanied with subtle lines touching my memories so softly. Aye! I love it. Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 6/6/2013 1:24:00 PM so creatively constructed; i like the rhyming scheme and poetic appeal..:) hugggs Login to Reply

Poet Tacito Date: 6/6/2013 12:04:00 PM This was very striking and full of impact. I'm really impressed with this. "Approach the French Kiss, feet drowned by trick"...fantastic line. Login to Reply

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri Date: 6/6/2013 8:43:00 AM I dont get it. Do explain what's d difrence btw my n yor couplets. Anyway dis was a dusty allegorical cryptic piece fine to commend! Wows! Login to Reply