Elai Cee Poet Couplet

Dusty Dust

Poor pygmy dust how long would you hide?
                                        Every side your brethren never died


                                        Possessed the wand of lady fairy
                                         If the mood of weather is rainy


                                    Sweet in every foot who touched its cheek
                                  Approach the French kiss, feet drowned by trick


                                          Really often ignore the dust's use
                                            But without it truly no soil use


                                           My friend dusty dust I'm insecure
                                          Your freedom to live always secure

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Terry O'Leary December 12, 2015 at 1:57 PM Amusing creation... wonderful read!!!

Cona Adams April 13, 2015 at 8:04 AM The couplet is one of my favorite forms. Welcome back to poetry soup, Elai

Bl Devnath June 23, 2013 at 10:41 AM Wonderful creation. Loved always, bl Elai Cee June 25, 2013 at 8:44 AM thanks BL

Mustapha Mohammed June 15, 2013 at 2:56 AM Cleverly penned dear Elai,you draw me in with your wonderful thoughts. :) Elai Cee June 15, 2013 at 3:08 AM thanks for the visit ! appreciate ur comment

Mario De Paz June 12, 2013 at 10:13 AM Good fantasy indeed. I wouldn't ever imagined to write or read a poem on poor pygmy dust, and so good

Richard Lamoureux June 12, 2013 at 8:24 AM What a great title as well. Great job.

Poet Destroyer A June 11, 2013 at 9:04 PM clever. Elai, the 3rd couplet had me wondering, then i reached in and found the imagery. an interesting poem. Thank you for sharing,.... xox~ LINDA Elai Cee June 12, 2013 at 7:35 AM thanks beautiful Linda!

Arthur Vaso June 6, 2013 at 11:44 PM Lovely!!

Andrea Dietrich June 6, 2013 at 6:33 PM that is so sure, its freedom is always secure. A most interesting topic to write on!!

Omotosho Seth June 6, 2013 at 3:59 PM This poem is rich in emotion, acompanied with subtle lines touching my memories so softly. Aye! I love it.

Nette Onclaud June 6, 2013 at 1:24 PM so creatively constructed; i like the rhyming scheme and poetic appeal..:) hugggs

Poet Tacito June 6, 2013 at 12:04 PM This was very striking and full of impact. I'm really impressed with this. "Approach the French Kiss, feet drowned by trick"...fantastic line.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri June 6, 2013 at 8:43 AM I dont get it. Do explain what's d difrence btw my n yor couplets. Anyway dis was a dusty allegorical cryptic piece fine to commend! Wows!