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Dusty Dust

Poor pygmy dust how long would you hide? Every side your brethren never died Possessed the wand of lady fairy If the mood of weather is rainy Sweet in every foot who touched its cheek Approach the French kiss, feet drowned by trick Really often ignore the dust's use But without it truly no soil use My friend dusty dust I'm insecure Your freedom to live always secure

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Terry O'Leary
Date: 12/12/2015 1:57:00 PM
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Amusing creation... wonderful read!!!
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Cona Adams
Date: 4/13/2015 8:04:00 AM
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The couplet is one of my favorite forms. Welcome back to poetry soup, Elai
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Bl Devnath
Date: 6/23/2013 10:41:00 AM
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Wonderful creation. Loved always, bl
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Elai Cee
Date: 6/25/2013 8:44:00 AM
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thanks BL
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 6/15/2013 2:56:00 AM
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Cleverly penned dear Elai,you draw me in with your wonderful thoughts. :)
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Elai Cee
Date: 6/15/2013 3:08:00 AM
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thanks for the visit ! appreciate ur comment
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Mario De Paz
Date: 6/12/2013 10:13:00 AM
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Good fantasy indeed. I wouldn't ever imagined to write or read a poem on poor pygmy dust, and so good
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/12/2013 8:24:00 AM
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What a great title as well. Great job.
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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 6/11/2013 9:04:00 PM
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clever. Elai, the 3rd couplet had me wondering, then i reached in and found the imagery. an interesting poem. Thank you for sharing,.... xox~ LINDA
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Elai Cee
Date: 6/12/2013 7:35:00 AM
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thanks beautiful Linda!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/6/2013 11:44:00 PM
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Lovely!!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/6/2013 6:33:00 PM
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that is so sure, its freedom is always secure. A most interesting topic to write on!!
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Omotosho Seth
Date: 6/6/2013 3:59:00 PM
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This poem is rich in emotion, acompanied with subtle lines touching my memories so softly. Aye! I love it.
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 6/6/2013 1:24:00 PM
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so creatively constructed; i like the rhyming scheme and poetic appeal..:) hugggs
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Poet Tacito
Date: 6/6/2013 12:04:00 PM
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This was very striking and full of impact. I'm really impressed with this. "Approach the French Kiss, feet drowned by trick"...fantastic line.
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 6/6/2013 8:43:00 AM
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I dont get it. Do explain what's d difrence btw my n yor couplets. Anyway dis was a dusty allegorical cryptic piece fine to commend! Wows!
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