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Dust Covered Dreams

Sadly He watched the old barn Wither, fade, weep Forgotten by time. Neglect A dereliction of youth Seeking the future Forgetting the past. The old harnesses cracked Tools bent by gravity’s inertia Dust covered dreams Wilting in silence As an old man Watches

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Jerry Brotherton

Date: 8/21/2023 8:49:00 AM

So sad my friend. Knowing we have the tools to repair what is broken but have now lost the power to use them.

Lin Lane

Date: 8/21/2023 7:24:00 AM

A barn, a body withered and wilting... the only thing dust doesn't cover is the hourglass of sand that continues to turn itself upside down, stealing time from everyone and everything. A worthwhile dream should not allow dust to settle. Really good writing, John.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/21/2023 5:42:00 AM

Great use of metaphors here in this one. I like the creativeness and descriptiveness in the lines. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara