Dustbunnies

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Reaching deep the corners for cobwebs in my brain longing to visit the dustbunnies of my mind spend some time shed some light and maybe water the unkempt garden Submitted on October 16, 2020 for contest OLD POEMS, FREE VERSE (003) sponsored by POET DESTROYER A - RANKED 3RD Posted on June 18, 2019

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John Watt

Date: 10/23/2020 9:31:00 AM

I think all of us with dust bunnies on the brain can smile and relate to this clever write, Line. Congratulations for your wonderful win ~ John

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/23/2020 12:15:00 PM

Thank you very much, John, for your most appreciated visit and comment ~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/22/2020 1:59:00 AM

Line, this one I choose, because it fit my moment and it was amazing to read. Congratulations and thank you for entering my contest. Always ~LINDA~

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/23/2020 12:17:00 PM

thank you very much, Linda, for this wonderful contest ~

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 6/19/2019 7:48:00 PM

I'm with Caren, I think your mind is beautifully kept and maintained! Mine, however... *cringe* Anyway, I LOVE this poem! ;)

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/19/2019 9:15:00 PM

Thanks, Rhona. I somehow am convinced you are quite fine. Thanks for your lovely visit.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/18/2019 3:45:00 PM

This piem has a quiet elegance about it. Panagiota xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/18/2019 7:29:00 PM

Thank you so much for the lovely visit and comment, Panagiota.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/18/2019 3:38:00 PM

I am smiling for I doubt there is one bit of an unkempt garden in your delightful brain, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/18/2019 7:30:00 PM

LOL you'd be surprised, Caren. There are lots of hiding places in our convoluted maze of a brain... but I certainly appreciate your vote of confidence.