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Dust

It’s the thought, the murmur, the whisper, The sound hanging on an ocean wind. Time is once again merciless, unforgiving, Plans for tomorrow that will result in Dust. Of a vision, a taste, a clasping hand, Made tight to fight away our shame. A pit so bright, so wide, so deep, Fear of tomorrow that will become Dust Mastering, an art, an illusion, a memory, The sands of time are whipped by wind. Fragrant the smell, I see on your face, Race for tomorrow, the prize in Dust. So, to face fear, of time, of space, No end is visible from the edge. Back broken, splintered by wood, Hide from tomorrow, when we become dust.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/8/2015 11:52:00 AM
"Mastering, an art, an illusion, a memory, the sands of time are whipped by wind" wonderful line, I'm captivated by your words. :)
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Date: 6/9/2014 4:15:00 PM
thank you for the reply
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Date: 6/9/2014 7:32:00 AM
A piece of good poetry. Keep it up and congrats on your poem selected to be featured, CT
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R. Pinchen
Date: 6/9/2014 1:48:00 PM
Hi, Appreciate your comments and thank you. C.T.
Date: 6/9/2014 7:24:00 AM
Hello C T..., , Congratulations on having your poem Featured on the Poetry Soups Home Page. Enjoy the coming week. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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R. Pinchen
Date: 6/9/2014 1:50:00 PM
Hi Linda/PD, Thank you. Pleased myself as only been here two days...Good week wishes to you too :) C.T.
Date: 6/8/2014 1:42:00 PM
Hi C.T., I wish to hide like dust every day, I enjoyed this poem, to face fear, we must acknowledge. , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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R. Pinchen
Date: 6/9/2014 1:56:00 PM
Hi Skat, Thanks for comments. I hope thats a nice hiding and not a scared one? i accept and return your friendship hugs and wish you a nice evening...C.T.
Date: 6/8/2014 12:01:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, C.T. :) - I choose your first great written poem - Bravo ! - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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R. Pinchen
Date: 6/9/2014 1:58:00 PM
Hi Anne, Thanks for comment and yes loving the soup family so far. Look forward to your next visit and will of course will reciprocate. Have a nice evening. C.T.
Date: 6/8/2014 9:05:00 AM
C.T.,, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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R. Pinchen
Date: 6/9/2014 2:01:00 PM
Hey Linda/PD, Hi again and thanks for your offer. I will try and upload a suitable poem. C.T.
Date: 6/7/2014 1:45:00 PM
Welcome to PoetrySoup, C. T, I enjoyed reading this first poem you have posted.. Here's hoping you enjoy getting to know people in this community, Keep writing and enjoy reading the poetry of others. If you comment on other's poems, many will return the favor. Best wishes.
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R. Pinchen
Date: 6/9/2014 2:02:00 PM
Hi Faye, Thanks for your comments and what a great place this is. Have met so many nice people in two days. Will take your advice on commenting on others. Have a nice evening. C.T.

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