Dusseldorf

In an unreal pre-dawn half-light
I gazed with much surprise
Across the darkly flowing Rhine
With newly-wakened eyes.
The vista on the river bank 
Was as within a dream.
A vision wonderful, surreal,
Exquisite it did seem.
These were not mountains, lochs and glens,
Or misty forest scenes,
These were as nothing Nature formed,
No waterfalls or streams
Or castles in the sky.
So what amazing sight was this,
So slowly passing by?
This was concrete, steel and glass,
Fired in imagination.
Modern art, space-age design,
The ultimate Man's creation.
Soaring, swooping, sleekly blending
Each shapely angle with its neighbour.
Whose vision brought these things to pass ?
What divine and perfect labour ?
In awe I watched the passing scene
And then, a moment's retrospection,
This splendid affluence had been 
Forged in devastation,
As from a hostile sky 
Came terror and destruction.
Seven hundred tons of bombs
Rained down in just one fiery night,
The city was ablaze, and come the dawn,
Still smouldering, a sorry sight.
Gaunt remnants, stark, skeletal, charred,
The fruits of war, forever scarred,
But from the ashes, undeterred,
Came inspiration to rebuild
And heal the all but fatal wound.
Faith in the future was instilled
And esoteric dreams fulfilled.
A phoenix rising, quite sublime,
In Dusseldorf, on the River Rhine.





Entered for contest "Foreign Travel"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 7/28/2018 4:19:00 PM
A poem that is reflective of the healing that took place after such devastation. You have expressed the beauty of this city so magnificently! Belated congratulations on your deserving win! : )
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Peter Rees
Date: 8/1/2018 2:08:00 AM
Many thanks for your kind words,Connie.
Date: 10/8/2017 3:40:00 AM
Peter - sincere congratulations on your well-earned win, my friend, and blessings for more such recognition of your wonderful writing talents! Keep up the great work!
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Peter Rees
Date: 10/8/2017 5:41:00 AM
Thank you, Gregory, for these kind and encouraging comments, which are much appreciated
Date: 10/7/2017 2:07:00 PM
Thank you for entering this piece in my Foreign Travel contest. I particularly enjoyed how you turned the piece to reflect on the history of the place and how it rose from the ashes. Well done. Congrats on your placement.
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Peter Rees
Date: 10/8/2017 5:42:00 AM
I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. Thank you.
Date: 8/16/2017 6:40:00 PM
I really love the way you almost sang the rising out of a horrible war.
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Peter Rees
Date: 8/17/2017 4:11:00 AM
Thank you so much Sunlite.Glad you enjoyed.
Date: 8/16/2017 11:56:00 AM
Peter You have overwhelmed me with sights and sounds . The war destroyed much that was of great value but the people brought it back with grit and determination. I hear the wonderment in your words. Great piece of writing it flows so easily like sliding down silk.
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Peter Rees
Date: 8/16/2017 12:17:00 PM
Thank you Patricia for this lovely comment. Love the idea of sliding down silk - I must try it !
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