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Dusk and Dawn

Dusk Romantic sunset Waves lapping shore swaying palms Lovers hand in hand Multi-coloured orange sky Promises of love aflame Dawn The day slowly dawns The sweet thrill of love lingers The night gently fades As life once more awakens As the sun bursts forth with its warmth

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Lord R. E. Taylor

Date: 12/10/2011 9:19:00 AM

This is beautiful seeing both sides of time and life

Danny Stinson

Date: 12/7/2011 9:42:00 PM

This is absolutely beautiful. It shows true love, certainly.

Judy Ball

Date: 12/6/2011 1:59:00 PM

There is a romantic feel to this. Beautiful imagery. Love it. God Bless, JB

Broken Butterfly

Date: 12/6/2011 4:33:00 AM

Dusk and Dawn. Very pretty and tranquil parts of the day that you have captured beautifully.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/5/2011 9:56:00 PM

Very beautiful, LIzzie!! It's a double treat.

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/5/2011 9:54:00 PM

What a wonderful portrayal of wondrous Dusk to Dawn! I can't say for sure which I like better...because I love them both! I enjoyed your poems a lot, thanks for sharing this poem with all of us!! Awesome Work!!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 12/5/2011 8:16:00 PM

Love from dusk to dawn is such a spectacular site, dear Lizzie. You are a hopeless romantic...I see the multi-coloured orange sky and fall in love all over again with these flames of love...nice images..Reminds me of sitting in front of a fireplace....Love, Gwendolen

Anonymous Dreamer

Date: 12/5/2011 7:40:00 PM

Lovely comparison between dusk and dawn. Keep writing!