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Dusk

Dusk As the dusk summons twilight, The sky deepens its colors. It gathers the quiet as it demands an audience. Transparently slow and thickening light, Sends out a scented chill, so slight, and at will, While the land below prepares for its darkness. It's colors of golden, red, brown and yellow, Submerge together in its mellow haze of lines, And with its swift action diminishes the sun. What beauty beholds us a gaze to its sight, A magnificent artwork for a moment or time, But it too shall pass with a blink of an eye. For dusk will begrudge dawn, With the passing hours of its shadow moon, A partial absence of sight, I bid you a good night. date of poem 24 July 2018

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Date: 1/8/2019 9:52:00 PM
I too have written several times on dusk. It's so beautiful in so many different ways. Gotta fave this one.
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Francesca Pappadogiannis
Date: 7/15/2019 1:07:00 PM
Oh angel, thank you again... You always inspire me to carry on...
Date: 10/3/2018 7:28:00 PM
There are so many beautifully artistic and poetically expressive verses in your lovely poem, Francesca. 'As the dusk summons twilight, The sky deepens its colors. It gathers the quiet as it demands an audience.' - this is such attention grabbing imagery and; 'For dusk will begrudge dawn, With the passing hours of its shadow moon' - exquisite emotion and textured telling of time.. Captivating and splendid poetry! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Francesca Pappadogiannis
Date: 10/8/2018 3:53:00 AM
Oh, thank you very much, Susan, for this lovely response. It really means a lot to me. Thank you kindly. Take care xxx

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