Trey Hamner Poet Free verse

Duplex

Limiting Our Restrictions

Sometimes
Limits
Are Placed
On us
To make
Better
People
Sometimes
Limits
Turn out
To be
What we
Needed
To grow
Into
What God
Gave us
Lastly,
Limits
Sometimes
Are meant
To be
Broken
To prove
That we
Never
Needed
Restraints
At all
Henceforth
Break your
Limits
And live
Like you
Know that
You should


12-6-2016

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Alexis Y. December 11, 2016 at 5:03 AM Hi Trey, Congratulations on your winning write: -) Alexis

Darren White December 10, 2016 at 11:59 PM Coming back to you to say congratulations! Trey Hamner December 11, 2016 at 1:13 AM Thank you so much, Darren. I really enjoy this site and the community of fellow poets, it gives me something to look forward to at the end of each day.

Agnes Krampe December 10, 2016 at 7:56 PM Congrats on your win, Trey. I like the message of your poem :)

Jan Allison December 10, 2016 at 6:35 PM I liked the uplifting ending on your poem Trey - Many congrats on your top spot:-) hugs Jan xx

Deborah Burch December 7, 2016 at 2:31 PM Indeed!! Take life off of cruise control....I like your work Trey. Well done. Hugggs. Cap'n Deb Trey Hamner December 7, 2016 at 4:01 PM Thank you for all your kind words, Deborah.

Becca Teagan December 7, 2016 at 5:57 AM This is an encouraging poem. My favorite lines are, "Limits Sometimes Are meant To be Broken To prove That we Never Needed Restraints At all" Trey Hamner December 7, 2016 at 12:01 PM Thank you, Rebecca, I'm glad you liked it and I appreciate the encouragement.

Darren White December 7, 2016 at 1:18 AM You broke your limits for sure. This is a wonderful entry. Good luck in the contest :) Trey Hamner December 7, 2016 at 1:35 AM Thank you very much, Darren.