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Duplex

Limiting Our Restrictions

Sometimes
Limits
Are Placed
On us
To make
Better
People
Sometimes
Limits
Turn out
To be
What we
Needed
To grow
Into
What God
Gave us
Lastly,
Limits
Sometimes
Are meant
To be
Broken
To prove
That we
Never
Needed
Restraints
At all
Henceforth
Break your
Limits
And live
Like you
Know that
You should


12-6-2016

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Alexis Y. Date: 12/11/2016 5:03:00 AM Hi Trey, Congratulations on your winning write: -) Alexis Login to Reply

Darren White Date: 12/10/2016 11:59:00 PM Coming back to you to say congratulations! Login to Reply Trey Hamner Date: 12/11/2016 1:13:00 AM Thank you so much, Darren. I really enjoy this site and the community of fellow poets, it gives me something to look forward to at the end of each day.

Jeff Davies Date: 12/10/2016 10:26:00 PM Another great and unique poem Trey, congratulations. Login to Reply

Agnes Krampe Date: 12/10/2016 7:56:00 PM Congrats on your win, Trey. I like the message of your poem :) Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 12/10/2016 6:35:00 PM I liked the uplifting ending on your poem Trey - Many congrats on your top spot:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Deborah Burch Date: 12/7/2016 2:31:00 PM Indeed!! Take life off of cruise control....I like your work Trey. Well done. Hugggs. Cap'n Deb Login to Reply Trey Hamner Date: 12/7/2016 4:01:00 PM Thank you for all your kind words, Deborah.

Becca Teagan Date: 12/7/2016 5:57:00 AM This is an encouraging poem. My favorite lines are, "Limits Sometimes Are meant To be Broken To prove That we Never Needed Restraints At all" Login to Reply Trey Hamner Date: 12/7/2016 12:01:00 PM Thank you, Rebecca, I'm glad you liked it and I appreciate the encouragement.

Darren White Date: 12/7/2016 1:18:00 AM You broke your limits for sure. This is a wonderful entry. Good luck in the contest :) Login to Reply Trey Hamner Date: 12/7/2016 1:35:00 AM Thank you very much, Darren.