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Dunstan River

Dunstan River of thee I write Thy waters gurgling through the night I did not return to thee that day For I was suddenly pulled away My home was not a constant place And friendships never deep I was a boy with only a familiar face And fleetive memories to keep I know then best the quiet room The quiet trees in the woodlands gloom The salt sea rocks where I came To dream of Dunstan river's claim For nothing owned that had not loved me Nothing ever can, but that river Was a discovery un-exhausted, a secrecy Not well explored ... a memory owning me forever O must got there again. I must Wade in and feel the lips of water lust Softly for my feet, and part its breasts So my head between them may rest And go to sleep, and go to sleep On an evening when only the birds sing And children still the peanut reap And the river, the river a long, long string

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/11/2009 9:10:00 AM
Brilliant imagery here..leaves the reader wanting to find Dunstan River and enjoy its charms! Splendidly done! Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my writes and your always nice comments~Mary
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Date: 12/8/2009 1:30:00 PM
Very inviting write because of the descriptiveness. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 12/7/2009 10:25:00 PM
Interesting imagery through this well written poem. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your comments on my poems today. Caroline.
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Date: 12/7/2009 5:56:00 PM
James is right , L'nass. This one is a beauty. Had to read it several times. That last verse is especially full and as poetic as one can get, I believe. Great one. Robert
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Date: 12/7/2009 4:21:00 PM
I feel the pores of your mind open with this beauty! L'nass! jimmy
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