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Dunstan River

Dunstan River of thee I write
Thy waters gurgling through the night
I did not return to thee that day
For I was suddenly pulled away
      My home was not a constant place
      And friendships never deep
      I was a boy with only a familiar face
      And fleetive memories to keep

I know then best the quiet room
The quiet trees in the woodlands gloom
The salt sea rocks where I came
To dream of Dunstan river's claim
     For nothing owned that had not loved me
     Nothing ever can, but that river
     Was a discovery un-exhausted, a secrecy
     Not well explored ... a memory owning me forever

O must got there again. I must 
Wade in and feel the lips of water lust
Softly for my feet, and part its breasts
So my head between them may rest
     And go to sleep, and go to sleep
     On an evening when only the birds sing
     And children still the peanut reap
     And the river, the river a long, long string

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/11/2009 9:10:00 AM
Brilliant imagery here..leaves the reader wanting to find Dunstan River and enjoy its charms! Splendidly done! Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my writes and your always nice comments~Mary
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Date: 12/8/2009 1:30:00 PM
Very inviting write because of the descriptiveness. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 12/7/2009 10:25:00 PM
Interesting imagery through this well written poem. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your comments on my poems today. Caroline.
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Date: 12/7/2009 5:56:00 PM
James is right , L'nass. This one is a beauty. Had to read it several times. That last verse is especially full and as poetic as one can get, I believe. Great one. Robert
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Date: 12/7/2009 4:21:00 PM
I feel the pores of your mind open with this beauty! L'nass! jimmy
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