Dung On a Rung

Surly Sally slipped and lost a flip flop
at a hearty party in a bungalow with Billy.
while dancing and prancing to hip hop
whirling and twirling and spinning silly.

Can you reverse and remember the flop she flipped?
Well it ludicrously landed in the party punch bowl.
Nobody noticed while they slurped and sipped
and the dancers dipped and ripped and rolled.

They dipped, danced, pranced and laughed,
pirouetted, and sweated,            
tipped and turned till totally daft.
Beer and booze abetted.

The next night they stayed sober and soloed somber.
Crashing and complaining Billy’s head hung,
both believed they’d been belted by a bomber.
Surly Sally swore she felt like dung on a rung!

Let this be a lurid logical lesson,
to those who think it’s only fun and frolick to abuse booze,
Or you too could be confessin’
And for lack of the light of this litany you’re liable to lose!


 An answer to a challenge for John Freeman’s Alliteration  contest
    by my poetry friend, Gwendolen Rix.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Delacroix Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 6:27 PM
Well done, Robert, humorously written and quite a lesson indeed. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for your comments on my latest. I am doing ok, thanks for asking, although these times are a challenge for me, but such is life. Haven'twritten as much lately either. Have posted a few on facebook, especially haikus which I am learning, and find quite challenging if one wants to write them right. Hope all is well with you. Best wishes, Caroline.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 15, 2011 at 9:11 PM
Oh Robert, what a delightful poem. I kept waiting for your title to appear and was not disappointed by the humor it relayed. Loved this one.
Kearley Avatar
September 13, 2011 at 12:50 PM
Wow! So funny and complex. Very nice.
Horne Avatar
September 13, 2011 at 10:39 AM
My apologies for missing so many contest results - many congrats on all your wins : )
Song Avatar
September 13, 2011 at 3:36 AM
Robert, Robert, Robert! You took my double dog dare challenge....! Excellent entry and such a lively one at that!!! This is not JUST an alliteration, it is a twilling twirling tongue-twister too!!!.....don't worry, I won't drink the punch!! Flip flop punch,...yummmy! You entertained so many with this tipsy write! Thanks for havin' fun with the gang! Favs for sure! Gwendolen
Onclaud Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 11:49 PM
yes to this, robert..loads of smiling cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs
Culverhouse Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 8:06 PM
witty silly nilly laughing my pants wet! ok not that bad but close!!
Kendrick Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 7:22 PM
Definitely different winning work..Congrats ...Sara
Lucas Mcclure Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 7:02 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win!!!!!!!---Lori
Freeman Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 2:18 PM
Robert, Thanks for the honor of reading your poem "Dung on a Rung" , I was honored by your worthy poetry. Congratulations on your place. Agape, Moses
Horsman Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 11:08 AM
excellent, congrats on this winner. Harry
Brown Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 8:48 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Moses' "Alliteration Poem Please" contest Robert. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 4:21 AM
Robert congrats on your win..David
Onclaud Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 1:56 AM
robert, this is greaaat! congrast on your delightful win.... :) huggs!
Sweetheart Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 12:56 AM
Congrats Robert on top ten victory with this great Alliteration poetry my friend..luv..
Ramsdale Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 12:50 AM
A 6th place congratulations Robert for your placement in John Freeman's Alliteration Poems Please contest. CR
Devonshire Avatar
September 10, 2011 at 3:42 AM
Your delightful poem had me giggling, Rob. It's been so long since I've drank that I can't even remember what "dung on a rung" felt like. Poor Sally! Best wishes in John's contest. I think he'll really enjoy this, just as I did. Love, Carolyn
Wesley Avatar
September 9, 2011 at 5:21 PM
Just the title made this a made this a must read! Enjoyed this rollicking party friend.
Horsman Avatar
September 9, 2011 at 11:20 AM
excellent robert, this is so good, will be hard to beat in contest, good luck. Harry
Pickett Avatar
September 9, 2011 at 11:03 AM
You kill me dude, Always ready for funnies...Good one...God Bless..Your Buddy....Taz
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