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Dumbstruck-Dk

Example for my contest. DUMBSTRUCK-DK I drove past this girl...on Sunset & Vine I couldn't see her face...so I beeped at her behind When she turned around...I nearly hit a caravan Because the girl that I had beeped at...was an ugly long-haired man So I drove on down the road...and I passed a lonesome guy There was something attractive about him...and I admit, it caught my eye When he turned around...I nearly hit a pick-up truck Because a beautiful girl turned around...so I felt a bit- dumbstruck!

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Reason A. Poteet

Date: 8/14/2021 1:24:00 PM

Two in a row, but you don't need glasses, sometimes you can't tell right away even face to face. Good one, Charlie.

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 8/14/2021 12:57:00 AM

Nice one Charles! never go by the dress or hair style! that has all changed!! You need to check the chromosomes!! good one! shall see if I can create something!:)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/12/2021 12:35:00 PM

thanks for the smile Charles:-) hugs Jan xx

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/10/2021 12:12:00 AM

Wow! that must have struck anyone dumbstruck, great example for the contest, Charles:) I have written on a similar theme - https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/mess_of_tress_in_an_upside_down_world_883791, if you want to check it out:) pretty strange world we live in:)

Hilo Poet

Date: 8/9/2021 9:04:00 PM

Hehe! Find a dark quiet street, park it, and finish your flask of Courvoisier and call it a night. A great example, truth-betold, taxing to top, thanks my friend, Aloha!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/9/2021 1:41:00 PM

Lol, maybe an appointment is needed at the opticians. Tom

Charles Messina
Date: 8/9/2021 4:18:00 PM

LOL, perhaps you are right! Thanks Tom...Charlie

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/9/2021 1:28:00 PM

Adorable. Great examples. God bless you and sending prayers, Love, Gina

Charles Messina
Date: 8/9/2021 4:19:00 PM

Thank you, Gina. God bless...sending love, Charlie

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/9/2021 12:16:00 PM

Wow!! Charles Messina, the odds that to happen. enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/10/2021 10:41:00 AM

Hello Charles Messina, it is weird for boys to dress as girls. Or girls as boys. It is strange. Enjoy your day my friend.

Charles Messina
Date: 8/9/2021 4:22:00 PM

Darlene, in today's world. With the way boys dress like girs and girls dress like boys it's not as slim of odds as you might think (lol) Have a nice evening my friend. Charlie

Marilene Evans

Date: 8/9/2021 11:51:00 AM

OMG. I enjoyed, enjoyed reading your poem and laughing all the way from the start to the end. Fun tastic!!!

Charles Messina
Date: 8/9/2021 4:24:00 PM

Dear Marlene, thank you so much! I am happy to hear you enjoyed this as much as I have in writing it...lol Have a nice evening...Charlie