Dull As a Disease-Win

Dull As A Disease

I am sitting in my Dorchester lair,
Behind the door I do feel your mien,
When my poetic muse is in apt flair
You look real as life, my amore mia.

When I am surfing on the internet,
You are there in my click I envisage,
When I initiate to scribe  sonnet,
I see you duly embossed on the page.

Sighing, wry face, lips as dry as a leaf
Your green blue deep eyes upraised fully,
Neither the death kills me, nor does the life,
Your very silence eats my soul and body.

Dull as a disease, I die of a thought,
Do not you fancy the same as I ought?.

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Date 21-10-13
Dr. Ram Mehta
Third place win
Contest: I Recall by Frank H.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 11/7/2013 11:48:00 AM
Dr. :) CONGRATULATIONS! Enjoyed your win............... Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 11/6/2013 7:41:00 PM
Dr Ram, nicely done.... congrats in Frank's contest.... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 11/5/2013 9:27:00 AM
This is an awesome and deeply engaging write. Read it several times. Going in my faves. Congrats on the well deserved win :)
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Date: 11/4/2013 8:40:00 PM
A sonnet truly worth of Shakespeare. .My friend I am impressed.... Congratulations on your win..... Regards.... Jake
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Date: 10/29/2013 10:20:00 PM
Dr. Ram This is a unique and interesting write. Filled with emotion and imagination. Nice job Thanks for the congrats on my Poetry Dan win. I appreciate it
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Date: 10/26/2013 7:36:00 AM
What a unique sonnet to be read. Great work!
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Date: 10/24/2013 3:41:00 PM
what a lovely sonnet you have created, quite romantic!
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Date: 10/23/2013 1:19:00 PM
Wow, doc; those last two lines are superlative and brought the whole thing home. I am jealous I didn't pen them! Great piece! :)
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Date: 10/23/2013 11:54:00 AM
Nice way to communicate love with poetic expression. Beautifully done. Goog luck. Loved always, bl
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Date: 10/23/2013 10:41:00 AM
Ahh!! Great work of excellent poetic quality..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 10/22/2013 12:24:00 PM
Excellent sonnet, Dr. Ram! I enjoyed...love and blessings, Rhonda
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 10/22/2013 10:22:00 PM
Thanks for your comments on my modern ghazal, Dr. Ram! Yes, it is much different from the traditional form. Debbie helped me with it. The couplets still must stand alone and in the moment (from external/subjective to internal/subjective) but there's no need for the rhyme or refrain.:))
Date: 10/22/2013 10:47:00 AM
both visual and very clever poetry from you Dr Ram,,enjoyed...
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Date: 10/22/2013 5:21:00 AM
I like how u say 'deep green blue eyes in an altogether amazing poem! Subliminal wry n wistful muse here.
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