Duel --- Co-Write With Liam Mcdaid
Sweet flowing hands
Sweeping charm
Dancing slowly
Like wings
of a butterfly
His eyes - gentle, perceiving, acknowledging
In the midst of silence, he's aware of her every move
Sliding along
Shuffles feet
as arms
go back
Taking snake shape
The great cobra strikes
His lips - challenged, firm yet slightly amused
In the midst of chaos, he's alert of her every attack
Clashing sounds
Defending one heart
Each strike
finding equal
Bows the head
in honor
of grace
His hands - deadly, lethal yet softened towards her
In the midst of the duel, he shares a moment with her
Claws attack
Sweeping movements
Floating on air
Gliding souls
Within a heartbeat
Smiling defeat
His heart - beats in admiration, slightly fascinated
In the end, as he smiles in defeat...a heart is silently stolen
Originally created in 2013.
(Note: The poem was inspired by the duel scene between actor Tony Chiu Wai Leung and actress Ziyi Zhang in the movie 'The Grandmaster' directed by Kar Wai Wong. This is a 2013 Hong Kong movie that tells the life story of a martial arts master who taught the Wing Chun martial art style to Bruce Lee.)
Copyright © Angeline Haikutwinkle | Year Posted 2017
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