Duck In a Dark City Lake

DUCK IN  A  DARK CITY LAKE	


Small and dark, materializing in the lake  
From the seamless blue black, the sprite  
Curved her path, leaving a gleaming wake,     
Its shimmering droplets of light    
Like a comet’s streaming tail in the night,     


A tracery glorious and ephemeral, enhanced    
With diamonds in rippling strands a-gleam     
Behind her  -  in unison they danced,      
One by one fading into the void and velvet stream -
Till her orbit’s remains were only a dream.         

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NOTE

Magnificent  beauty  is  all  around,  even in the  simplest  events,  
like   this small duck swimming in a dark lake.

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Written  2nd December  2011
Entered in Francine Roberts's  Contest  "English Quintain"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 12/19/2011 6:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your super 10th place in Francine's "English Quintain" contest Sidney. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/18/2011 12:22:00 AM
I sure remember this one, Sydney. Congrats on the winner's list. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 12/17/2011 10:50:00 PM
Beautifuly written. An artist's eye. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/17/2011 9:23:00 PM
congrats on your 10th place win in the contest Sid
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Date: 12/9/2011 10:49:00 PM
wow, you do such beautiful poetry, and I'm so glad you enjoyed my one about letting go going into the night!
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Date: 12/5/2011 9:02:00 PM
This one had me droolin', Syd, nice job! ~N
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