Dubious Possesion

Roses unfolding the redness inside me

Swathed my heart…my entirety

These petals slowly uncovering with glee

Trying to unveil the veracity.

Peeling the deepness…

Unraveling the emptiness….

Grip the stem of this forlorn petal

Sip all its sweet nectar…

Its yours.

Its yours to keep.

Its yours to cherish..

It’s yours to relish…

Open your heart 

Glance at this redness

Stare beyond the vastness 

Discern this emptiness…

Bisect the thinness of these petals

Caress all its brightest hues…

Its yours.

Its yours to marvel.

Its yours to adore..

Its yours to admire….

Mind this bud

Look into its uniqueness

Be thrilled with its highness

Pervade this emptiness…

Scrutinize the potency of these sepals

Test its verdant shadows 

Its yours.

Its yours to dwell.

Its yours to lurk…

Its yours to skulk…

Neglect it and you’ll suffer

Desert it...you lackluster!

But its’ beauty you never could hinder

It’s sincerity you couldn’t vex forever

Grasp it in a jiffy….

Posses it mild and swiftly…

A n y w a y

Its yours.

Its yours to keep

Yours to marvel

Yours to dwell

Its yours…

Its all yours…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 12/13/2024 11:15:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 3/21/2016 8:54:00 PM
Kareen, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/15/2016 8:58:00 PM
Kareen, I like every line of your poem above. Thank you for sharing. ** SKAT **
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Date: 10/12/2008 8:36:00 AM
Kareen - I just loved this poem - The way you used the rose was splendid - great poetry - God Bless
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Date: 10/12/2008 8:32:00 AM
Wonderfull and very poetic because it lives you thinkin wat does she means very exqusite
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Date: 10/12/2008 8:21:00 AM
This is an excellent poem. I like how the title resonates throughout the poem, and how the essence of the rose is reinforced. Great job and welcome to poetry Soup! ~Joseph
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Date: 10/12/2008 7:50:00 AM
Leaves one wondering how many things and emotions a single flower can represent! Brgds. George
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