Dual To the Death

Another sleepless night, reading a book by lamplight
I never thought I would witness a terrible deadly fight

Annoyed at no sleep, and trying to concentrate
Then it all happened and two did meet and sealed their deathly fate

I caught a glimpse of the start out of the corner of my eye
It made me jump I was not sure, it was really up quite high

I watched them circle, testing, I didn’t know what to do...
I thought that I would watch a while, I nearly regretted it too.

The one on the right jabbed forth and caught the other unawares
I wondered if there were more about or was it just the pair.

The second one seemed to dance away but then lunged back quite quick
I’m sure I heard the contact noise, it was beginning to make me sick

They grabbed each other and fought and jabbed and then they both fell over
I was pulling bed clothes high up now my book had dropped and turned over

The noise they made when they hit the floor was really something loud
I nearly screamed what should I do, but I didn’t want a crowd

I lost sight of them and then I thought the fight was done
But after a while one reappeared but it was the only one.

The second was wrapped up tight, being dragged along by the first
It looked like one had killed the other with a bloody thirst

What to do I, must move, I am riveted to the spot
What if there are more of them, I might cop for the lot...

Sanity prevailed, as the first one now falls over too
I know I must do something; I know now what to do

Hubby is asleep in the bedroom next to mine
That way he can get some sleep I won’t disturb him all the time

I call him in, “I need you here please" I open his door wider
Come quick and bring the vacuum you need to suck up a dead spider

It's not one really but over there they have had a terrible fight
Don’t worry he said being the man, everything will be alright

He gallantly stood on a chair the vacuum pipe in his hand
Good grief they have killed each other they are off to dead spider land.

Are you sure they are gone and they won’t crawl back out
Don’t worry if they do just come in and give a shout.

Needless to say I left the room I could not sleep there now
So until my spider sense stop tingling, I will not go in no how.
©~GG~4/09/2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 9/8/2012 1:41:00 PM
we always just let spiders stay in our bedroom - crikey, maybe there's a massacre every night! My mum would have screamed the house down too. Lovely write, my friend. Big congrats on all your wins : )
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Date: 9/6/2012 8:41:00 AM
I don't like spiders either, especially since I have a nasty bite on my face. and they are the most likely culprits! I liked your spider sense - wish I had one- maybe I wouldn't have this stupid bite. at least it doesn't itch. anyway, I really enjoyed your story :)
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Date: 9/5/2012 8:34:00 PM
funny!!I thought when I first read the title that it would be a good one for an old married couple.
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Date: 9/5/2012 4:12:00 PM
At first, I thought you were describing a movie with Jean Claude VanDamme in it. Good descriptive couplets with appropriate rhyming.
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Date: 9/5/2012 2:43:00 PM
Spiders in the house are creepy. Hope you were able to slpee. Great story here.
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Date: 9/5/2012 1:06:00 PM
GREAT WRITE GG,YOU CONTINUE TO THRILL ME,KEEP GOING BUT TRY TO GET A LITTLE SLEEP
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Date: 9/5/2012 8:37:00 AM
wow i hope you do get some sleep, sometime. yet if you keep turning out fables like this, maybe i know know if you should sleep at all, afterall your imagination runs riot here, and i confess dear lady i just love this.
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Date: 9/5/2012 8:55:00 AM
Thanks Harry, at the moment I get about 2 hours a night gotta do something about it its making me miserable ha ha specially when the room has gigantic dueling spiders xx
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