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Dual Pleasure

Lonely hearts are filled with emotions, sorting fragile feelings to embrace. And as two souls intertwine in dream, their destinies merge and interlace. Love is candy treats and satin sheets when reality is a mirage. And heavenly bliss describes each kiss as eager lips pamper and massage. Time loses all desire to move on, held hostage by magic, love imparts. And the moon inspires lingering sighs, igniting passion in tinder hearts. Shy smiles oft erupt into laughter, refreshing as a sprinkle of rain. And hope roots in this garden of joy, as trust weeds out all traces of pain. Life's a collage of precious moments, where every second is a treasure. And as racing pluses synchronize, they culminate in dual pleasure. (Quatrain) 4/26/2016

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Date: 3/13/2018 2:41:00 PM
Love these lines the most "Love's a collage of precious moments and each and every one is a treasure." Beautiful, Emile.
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Date: 3/13/2018 3:08:00 PM
Thank you Line, I appreciate your continued support and friendship my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/8/2016 5:30:00 AM
I am so very happy that you are doing better Emile. I really enjoyed reading your wonderful poem. Take care and keep getting better my friend. Blessings, Connie #7 ; )
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Date: 5/8/2016 9:36:00 AM
Thank you so much Connie, I am getting through this ordeal better than I expected, thanks to wonderful friends like you who continue to keep me in their prayers, I am so grateful. Emile.
Date: 5/6/2016 9:01:00 AM
So many lovely pairings in this poem, providing just cause to intermit my read, reflect and then to marvel. Couldn't improve upon your final two lines but equally enjoyed "as destinies merge and interlace." Noticed your cogent response to one of Andrea's poems and just had to read some of your work.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/7/2016 8:47:00 AM
Thanks Mark, I appreciate your friendly comments and encouragement. Emile.
Date: 4/27/2016 3:36:00 PM
I'm glad to read about these dual pleasures, dear. I'm so glad that you are back posting and glad to know you are doing well. Hugs
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Date: 4/27/2016 5:43:00 PM
Thanks Eileen, I appreciate your comments and concerns, I am feeling better each day. Emile.
Date: 4/27/2016 8:20:00 AM
so brilliant see you come back with this wonderful write:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/27/2016 9:58:00 AM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate your comments. I am responding well to therapy, thanks again, Emile.
Date: 4/27/2016 6:42:00 AM
Lovely lovely lovely....'hope roots in this garden of joy, as trust weeds out all traces of pain' ... indeed
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Date: 4/27/2016 8:15:00 AM
Thank you very much Sizwe, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 4/26/2016 9:01:00 PM
I remember a comic strip, Love is... candy treats an satin sheets a great line! great write!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/27/2016 8:18:00 AM
Thank you Robert, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 4/26/2016 8:29:00 PM
Great poem, missed your writing you are singular in your talent but enjoyed dual pleasure. Hope you are feeling better.
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Date: 4/27/2016 8:19:00 AM
Thank you very much John, I appreciate your comments. I am responding well to therapy, thanks for asking, Emile.

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