Dry Leaves Drop

The arched bulky branches of the banyan
In delight swaying caressed by the breeze
The dry leaves drop below in the canyon
The wind keeps looking wildly for the keys 

The golden dewdrops on a leafless twig
They glisten and swing fast in morning air
Suddenly strikes a gust of wind quite big
Robbed of dew drops the twig trembles in fear

A neighbour comes and says the poor woman
Run over by a car last night expired
I looked at the dry branch of the banyan
A lonely cage sobs on, all dew drops sheared

We of course love to travel by blue train
Unaware of the black coat that pulls chain
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18/10/2016
For the contest: Words Drowned In Tears
Sponsored by Broken Wings
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 14, 2016 at 6:50 PM
Superbly written sonnet, Probir. The imagery of the banyan coupled w/the death of the woman is poetically paired perfection. Outstanding poem. Much love to you.
Gupta Avatar
November 14, 2016 at 7:57 PM
Thank you ...
La France Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 6:45 PM
Probir congratulations on your win in my contest with this sad write
Gupta Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 9:46 PM
Thank you so much for liking my poem ...
Kimathi Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 4:30 PM
Congrats Probir, for your placement with this fine piece!! :-)
Gupta Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 5:50 AM
Thank you ...
Dutta Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 1:59 PM
Congrats on your placement.
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October 25, 2016 at 5:50 AM
Thank you ...
Nayak Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 1:59 AM
Love this poem.. a very well written poem ...loved last two lines...leaves sheared of all dew, so sad Congratulations on your win dear Probir //love, ANU:)
Roper Avatar
October 23, 2016 at 7:21 PM
Heartfelt, Probir.. Congratulations on your win....Hugs eve
Gupta Avatar
October 23, 2016 at 9:16 PM
Thank you, Eve .... Thank you for the info also .... I am yet to see ...
Bhurani Avatar
October 21, 2016 at 11:03 AM
I am touched by the scene......well portrayed....gl
Gupta Avatar
October 22, 2016 at 1:05 AM
Thank you ...
Bocsa Avatar
October 21, 2016 at 6:14 AM
Travelling along wonderful poems, I admired your ones serene like a walk in a park of wonders.
Gupta Avatar
October 21, 2016 at 7:30 AM
Thank you ...
Trifiatis Avatar
October 19, 2016 at 7:07 AM
Dancing images and verses enthralling the heart dear, Probir! Good luck my friend!
Gupta Avatar
October 19, 2016 at 11:14 AM
Thank you ..
Onclaud Avatar
October 19, 2016 at 6:17 AM
ohh, so somberly beautiful, probir..huggs
Gupta Avatar
October 19, 2016 at 11:15 AM
Thank you ...
Wolf Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 9:21 PM
Awesome sonnet mate, though sad, still inspiring i found it. /|\
Gupta Avatar
October 19, 2016 at 5:30 AM
Thank you ...
Rodrigues Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 5:30 PM
Enjoyed your lovely images of this bittersweet poem!
Gupta Avatar
October 19, 2016 at 5:31 AM
Thank you ...
P  Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 10:08 AM
Strong sonnet for the contest, although a sad vibe. Love the first verse the most. Good luck.
Gupta Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 12:07 PM
Thank you ...
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