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Dry Leaves Drop

The arched bulky branches of the banyan In delight swaying caressed by the breeze The dry leaves drop below in the canyon The wind keeps looking wildly for the keys The golden dewdrops on a leafless twig They glisten and swing fast in morning air Suddenly strikes a gust of wind quite big Robbed of dew drops the twig trembles in fear A neighbour comes and says the poor woman Run over by a car last night expired I looked at the dry branch of the banyan A lonely cage sobs on, all dew drops sheared We of course love to travel by blue train Unaware of the black coat that pulls chain ___________________________________ 18/10/2016 For the contest: Words Drowned In Tears Sponsored by Broken Wings

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Date: 11/14/2016 6:50:00 PM
Superbly written sonnet, Probir. The imagery of the banyan coupled w/the death of the woman is poetically paired perfection. Outstanding poem. Much love to you.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/14/2016 7:57:00 PM
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Date: 10/25/2016 6:45:00 PM
Probir congratulations on your win in my contest with this sad write
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/25/2016 9:46:00 PM
Thank you so much for liking my poem ...
Date: 10/24/2016 4:30:00 PM
Congrats Probir, for your placement with this fine piece!! :-)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/25/2016 5:50:00 AM
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Date: 10/24/2016 1:59:00 PM
Congrats on your placement.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/25/2016 5:50:00 AM
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Date: 10/24/2016 1:59:00 AM
Love this poem.. a very well written poem ...loved last two lines...leaves sheared of all dew, so sad Congratulations on your win dear Probir //love, ANU:)
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Date: 10/23/2016 7:21:00 PM
Heartfelt, Probir.. Congratulations on your win....Hugs eve
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/23/2016 9:16:00 PM
Thank you, Eve .... Thank you for the info also .... I am yet to see ...
Date: 10/21/2016 11:03:00 AM
I am touched by the scene......well portrayed....gl
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/22/2016 1:05:00 AM
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Date: 10/21/2016 6:14:00 AM
Travelling along wonderful poems, I admired your ones serene like a walk in a park of wonders.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/21/2016 7:30:00 AM
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Date: 10/19/2016 7:07:00 AM
Dancing images and verses enthralling the heart dear, Probir! Good luck my friend!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/19/2016 11:14:00 AM
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Date: 10/19/2016 6:17:00 AM
ohh, so somberly beautiful, probir..huggs
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/19/2016 11:15:00 AM
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Date: 10/18/2016 9:21:00 PM
Awesome sonnet mate, though sad, still inspiring i found it. /|\
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/19/2016 5:30:00 AM
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Date: 10/18/2016 5:30:00 PM
Enjoyed your lovely images of this bittersweet poem!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/19/2016 5:31:00 AM
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Date: 10/18/2016 10:08:00 AM
Strong sonnet for the contest, although a sad vibe. Love the first verse the most. Good luck.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/18/2016 12:07:00 PM
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