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In sixty-five and half years been Lock-in love with you again And again, our marriage soft-land Dreamland at times and times dryland Those Valentines' gifts counterpoise Disclose your feelings and expose Your desire to not reinsure Anymore your love for me, bore

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/25/2025 1:02:00 PM

What a hilarious meme! And how dead on your poem!!!! Congrats, Sara!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/20/2025 3:16:00 PM

Your humor shines in this one Sara. Sixty-five years is an eternity sometimes. Clever and twisty. :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/21/2025 10:07:00 AM

Linda, well, the years sometimes speed by and again they very slowly. It has been hard at times, easy at times and sometimes exasperating but we hung in there and it all worked out in the long run. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/20/2025 3:36:00 PM

It reminds me of my grandfather who at an old age still had a form of jealousy.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/21/2025 6:06:00 AM

John, I think we all have some jealousy, and it is probably a built-in quality for our protection, but it can become too much and very dangerous. The Bible says our God is a jealous God and He has the right to be jealous of His people when they go astray. Since, we as His people were made in His image, we have the same qualities as He has, hence the jealousy. Sara K

Ink Empress

Date: 2/15/2025 8:24:00 AM

Dear sara the meme made me smile haha thats perfect!! I absolutely love the rhymes and flow of your words here in such a seamless manner as always. Hope you had a wonderful valentines with your husband. Pleasure reading you always. Sending you light

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/21/2025 6:01:00 AM

IE, Valentine's Day was about the same as any other day. My husband had some teeth pulled and was aiming to get some new upper dentures and he did get them the day before Valentine's Day. We did go out that day which was our Valentine's Day out. He is still adjusting to his teeth. It will be six months before he gets his permanent plate. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/13/2025 4:25:00 PM

Bore. That was. Funny ending!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/14/2025 9:02:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. Yes, sometimes marriage can become a drag, bore, or any of those things like those. Your visits are always uplifting. I gave him three pieces of Russell Stover's fancy chocolate. He must have eaten it. I hear him snoring..LOL...Sara K

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/13/2025 10:38:00 AM

Loved the joke. The poem is the ideal for St Valentine's Day.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/14/2025 9:00:00 AM

Thank you, Victor. I am glad you enjoyed the whole enchilada. What would an enchilada be without the filling and the topping. Sara K

Valsa George

Date: 2/13/2025 4:34:00 AM

This is really a great entry for the valentine contest . All the Best dear Sara. I like the poem and the cartoon image

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/13/2025 4:49:00 AM

Thank you, Valsa. I appreciate the visit and nice review. Sara K

Yann Rolland

Date: 2/13/2025 1:20:00 AM

valentine is not what we expect, and we can be disappointed after years, interesting counterpoint , thanks poet

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/13/2025 4:46:00 AM

Yes, Valentine's Day is just another day here. LOL..I can't remember if my husband gave me anything after our first married Valentine's Day or not. I don't think so. I do a little something extra for him. I used to bake him a chocolate cake with red hot hearts candy on the top. Thanks for the visit. Sara K