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Drunken Moon

**blood moon** 

Waiting for night fall 
The moment of love is made 
The moon is bruised 

~a poet destroyer collaboration~

Copyright © Herbert Siao | Year Posted 2015

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December 3, 2015 at 1:14 AM

Enjoying this again... SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

July 11, 2015 at 1:04 AM

Herbert, Congratulations on your Drunken Moon haiku win. I'm so honored to be a part of your haiku. I'm smiling from ear to ear. A sweet little fav... sending you warm smiles, all the way from South Texas--- Always & Forever ~LINDA~

July 11, 2015 at 6:33 AM

Thanks Linda and congrats as well. God bless.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

July 9, 2015 at 12:41 AM

Awesome haiku n win Herbert!Big congrats!

July 11, 2015 at 6:32 AM

Thanks Doc

July 8, 2015 at 6:36 PM

Haha that is good, I'll never look at the blood moon the same now!

July 11, 2015 at 6:31 AM

Thanks Nance

Richard Lamoureux

July 8, 2015 at 8:22 AM

Congratulations.

July 11, 2015 at 6:30 AM

Thank you Richard

July 8, 2015 at 2:31 AM

great win many congrats:-) hugs jan xx

July 8, 2015 at 5:05 AM

Thank You Jan

Andrea Dietrich

July 7, 2015 at 11:42 PM

Congrats for your win. I knew it would place high!

July 7, 2015 at 11:45 PM

Thank you Andrea. The honor is for PD as well as mine.

July 7, 2015 at 11:34 PM

Well penned, Herbert, and congratulations. Regards, Viv

July 7, 2015 at 11:45 PM

Thanks most kindly Viv.

July 7, 2015 at 11:13 PM

Congrats on your win!

July 7, 2015 at 11:23 PM

Thanks Lee Carter. Thanks most humbly.

July 7, 2015 at 11:21 PM

Thanks SKAT A, The Drunken Moon Haiku I wrote is about two couple in love separated by circumstances. Moon and sun lives in two different world, do their responsibility and only met when fate push them to each other. But I think the one who had contributed an artist touch was poet destroyer. The credit also to her than mine. Once again, thank you most kindly.

July 7, 2015 at 10:53 PM

Herbert, I find the blood moon to be very romantic. it's like waiting an eternity for something so rare. Love the collaboration Congratulations, on your awesome Drunken Moon win... Thank you for supporting this contest... **SKAT**

July 7, 2015 at 11:30 PM

Thanks SKAT. God bless to you.

July 5, 2015 at 6:01 PM

Wonderful write a 7 Hugs Eve

July 7, 2015 at 11:24 PM

Thanks Eve

Poet Destroyer A

July 4, 2015 at 2:40 PM

Herbert, thank you for commenting my comment. That was nice of you

July 7, 2015 at 11:25 PM

We place to a contest Linda. Cheers and congrats.

July 4, 2015 at 4:07 PM

Cheers poet destroyer. Actually, I just read your haiku for drunken moon, also Andrea and Lyric Man and I discovered I wrote poorly and i did a mess. You guys are great. Have a nice day.

Andrea Dietrich

July 4, 2015 at 10:01 AM

Drunk with love!!!

July 4, 2015 at 2:32 PM

Thanks Andrea

Poet Destroyer A

July 4, 2015 at 1:07 AM

Hebert, love the hot passionate haiku. good luck in the contest. LINDA

July 4, 2015 at 2:33 PM

Thanks Linda. Goodluck

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