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Drunken Moon

**blood moon** 

Waiting for night fall 
The moment of love is made 
The moon is bruised 

~a poet destroyer collaboration~

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Skat A

Date: 12/3/2015 1:14:00 AM

Enjoying this again... SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/11/2015 1:04:00 AM

Herbert, Congratulations on your Drunken Moon haiku win. I'm so honored to be a part of your haiku. I'm smiling from ear to ear. A sweet little fav... sending you warm smiles, all the way from South Texas--- Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Herbert Siao
Date: 7/11/2015 6:33:00 AM

Thanks Linda and congrats as well. God bless.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/9/2015 12:41:00 AM

Awesome haiku n win Herbert!Big congrats!

Herbert Siao
Date: 7/11/2015 6:32:00 AM

Thanks Doc

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/8/2015 6:36:00 PM

Haha that is good, I'll never look at the blood moon the same now!

Herbert Siao
Date: 7/11/2015 6:31:00 AM

Thanks Nance

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/8/2015 8:22:00 AM

Congratulations.

Herbert Siao
Date: 7/11/2015 6:30:00 AM

Thank you Richard

Jan Allison

Date: 7/8/2015 2:31:00 AM

great win many congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Herbert Siao
Date: 7/8/2015 5:05:00 AM

Thank You Jan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/7/2015 11:42:00 PM

Congrats for your win. I knew it would place high!

Herbert Siao
Date: 7/7/2015 11:45:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. The honor is for PD as well as mine.

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/7/2015 11:34:00 PM

Well penned, Herbert, and congratulations. Regards, Viv

Herbert Siao
Date: 7/7/2015 11:45:00 PM

Thanks most kindly Viv.

Lee Carter

Date: 7/7/2015 11:13:00 PM

Congrats on your win!

Herbert Siao
Date: 7/7/2015 11:23:00 PM

Thanks Lee Carter. Thanks most humbly.

Herbert Siao
Date: 7/7/2015 11:21:00 PM

Thanks SKAT A, The Drunken Moon Haiku I wrote is about two couple in love separated by circumstances. Moon and sun lives in two different world, do their responsibility and only met when fate push them to each other. But I think the one who had contributed an artist touch was poet destroyer. The credit also to her than mine. Once again, thank you most kindly.

Skat A

Date: 7/7/2015 10:53:00 PM

Herbert, I find the blood moon to be very romantic. it's like waiting an eternity for something so rare. Love the collaboration Congratulations, on your awesome Drunken Moon win... Thank you for supporting this contest... **SKAT**

Herbert Siao
Date: 7/7/2015 11:30:00 PM

Thanks SKAT. God bless to you.

Eve Roper

Date: 7/5/2015 6:01:00 PM

Wonderful write a 7 Hugs Eve

Herbert Siao
Date: 7/7/2015 11:24:00 PM

Thanks Eve

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/4/2015 2:40:00 PM

Herbert, thank you for commenting my comment. That was nice of you

Herbert Siao
Date: 7/7/2015 11:25:00 PM

We place to a contest Linda. Cheers and congrats.

Herbert Siao
Date: 7/4/2015 4:07:00 PM

Cheers poet destroyer. Actually, I just read your haiku for drunken moon, also Andrea and Lyric Man and I discovered I wrote poorly and i did a mess. You guys are great. Have a nice day.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/4/2015 10:01:00 AM

Drunk with love!!!

Herbert Siao
Date: 7/4/2015 2:32:00 PM

Thanks Andrea

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/4/2015 1:07:00 AM

Hebert, love the hot passionate haiku. good luck in the contest. LINDA

Herbert Siao
Date: 7/4/2015 2:33:00 PM

Thanks Linda. Goodluck