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Drunken Moon

full moon's reflection

mellow on the *wavey sea. . .

i feel so wasted


*wavey is urban slang for very drunk
Written July 3, 2015 by Andrea Dietrich

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Jack Horne

July 29, 2015 at 4:50 PM

awesome haiku, my friend

Poet Destroyer A

July 11, 2015 at 1:05 AM

Andrea, Congratulations on your Drunken Moon haiku win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Lycia Harding

July 10, 2015 at 3:34 PM

Ughhh.... bed spins... ha! Great Haiku, great win. Congrats, Andrea! xoxoxo

Thomas Martin

July 9, 2015 at 12:42 PM

Like this, Andrea! Memorable metaphor.

Daver Austin

July 9, 2015 at 11:19 AM

That old devil moon done got my friend smashed. Hope you had some romance out of the binge. Good one. Love, daver P.S. I'm way behind. Sorry.

Jennifer Walker

July 9, 2015 at 7:28 AM

As Pandita writes, brilliant haiku from a golden pen.

Richard Lamoureux

July 9, 2015 at 6:47 AM

Cool picture and poem! Congrats.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

July 9, 2015 at 12:44 AM

Congrats on ur perfect haiku n win Andrea!

David Mohn

July 8, 2015 at 8:19 PM

Congrats Andrea...glad to see this placed high

Casarah Nance

July 8, 2015 at 6:39 PM

Nice play on words with the wavey, awesome win andrea

Paul Callus

July 8, 2015 at 10:53 AM

Congratulations, Andrea! Had no doubt this would be on the winners' list! // paul

Constance La France

July 8, 2015 at 8:05 AM

Andrea, a big congratulations on your placement in the contest, and thanks for visiting my drunken poem

John Lawless

July 8, 2015 at 7:13 AM

AH, wavey...so much better than some of the less poetic descriptions...The last line has the banned in haiku metaphoric tone to keep the mind engaged.

Pandita Sietesantos

July 8, 2015 at 7:04 AM

A brilliant haiku from a golden pen! Congratulations, Andie on your superb win! Pandita

Connie Marcum Wong

July 8, 2015 at 4:53 AM

Congrats on your win Andrea. I wasn't aware of the word wavey so I learned something new. Thanks, Connie

Jan Allison

July 8, 2015 at 2:32 AM

great imagery and image - congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Aiyah Torres

July 8, 2015 at 1:31 AM

always greatly done!!! Congrats on your win :O)

Viv Wigley

July 7, 2015 at 11:36 PM

No surprise, Andrea, well done, lass. Viv x

Lee Carter

July 7, 2015 at 11:18 PM

Great drunken moon Andrea congrats!

Alexis Y.

July 7, 2015 at 11:10 PM

Andrea this piece is great! Congratulations on your win:-) Alexis

Skat A

July 7, 2015 at 10:57 PM

LOL, Andrea, love the way you ended the haiku. Congratulations, on your awesome Drunken Moon win... Thank you for supporting this contest... **SKAT**

John Freeman

July 6, 2015 at 8:50 PM

Yep, nature's wonders can have that effect! top three, No! Agape, Moses

Paul Callus

July 6, 2015 at 4:39 PM

Very clever of you, Andrea! The word 'wavey' refers to drunk, so does the word 'wasted' which refers to someone under the influence of alcohol. // paul

Paul Callus

July 6, 2015 at 5:39 PM

Hmmm quite up-to-date for someone who doesn't drink! I had a feeling that 'mellow' meant 'high', but was not sure:)

Andrea Dietrich

July 6, 2015 at 5:12 PM

AND mellow is also "drunk!" I covered all my bases for all nature to be totally inebriated. haha.