Dr. Upma A. Sharma Poet Haiku

Drunken Moon

Drunken moon





      monstrous white crystal
      excited lolls in dark sky
      dripping the moonlight








Haiku- 5/7/5
Written July 3rd, 2015
By Dr.Upma A.Sharma
For contest "Drunken moon" by SKAT A

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Darlene Gifford July 24, 2015 at 6:18 AM A great image! I can clearly see your moon. A 7. And congrats on your more than one contest wins.

Poet Destroyer A July 11, 2015 at 1:10 AM Dr Upma, Congratulations on your Drunken Moon haiku win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~ Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 11, 2015 at 2:24 AM Thnx PD !

Eve Roper July 9, 2015 at 9:39 AM Wonderful description of the moon, Dr. Upma A. Sharma, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 11, 2015 at 2:25 AM Thnx Eve !

Richard Lamoureux July 9, 2015 at 7:07 AM I enjoyed your poem Upma. I'm a bit behind on the contests but I'm glad I stopped by to read this one. Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 11, 2015 at 2:23 AM Thanks Richard!

Julia Ward July 9, 2015 at 4:02 AM Infectious humour... Well done on win. Julia, :)) Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 9, 2015 at 5:28 AM thnx julia!

Tim Smith July 8, 2015 at 3:32 PM Congrats Upma on this fine win Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 9, 2015 at 1:20 AM Thnx a lot Tim!

Paul Callus July 8, 2015 at 1:21 PM Congratulations on your fine win, Upma! The last line is great! All the best. // paul Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 9, 2015 at 1:20 AM Thnx a lot Paul!

Andrea Dietrich July 7, 2015 at 11:51 PM big congrats to you! Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 8, 2015 at 8:32 AM Thnx Andrea!

Viv Wigley July 7, 2015 at 11:48 PM Lovely, oozy animation. Well done, Dr Upma. Viv x Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 8, 2015 at 8:36 AM Thnx Viv!

Lee Carter July 7, 2015 at 11:38 PM Nice win! Top of my list this one! Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 8, 2015 at 8:35 AM Thnx Lee!

Skat A July 7, 2015 at 11:03 PM Dr Upma, Congratulations, on your awesome Drunken Moon win... Thank you for supporting this contest... **SKAT** Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 8, 2015 at 8:31 AM Thanks a lot Skat!

Kelly Deschler July 5, 2015 at 10:10 PM A nicely written haiku, Dr. Upma. I love the imagery! Good luck in SKAT's contest! Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 5, 2015 at 11:18 PM Thnx a lot Kelly!

James Fraser July 4, 2015 at 12:11 PM Beautifully penned Upma, and sure to do well in the contest, James :) Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 5, 2015 at 1:10 AM Thnx James! Appreciate ur kind visit n wishes!

Poet Destroyer A July 3, 2015 at 5:54 PM Dr Upma, wow that is shiny. Love the imagery. Good luck in the contest@-> LINDA <-@ Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 3, 2015 at 10:56 PM Thnx for your kind support n good wishes always dear Linda!

Eileen Manassian July 3, 2015 at 4:40 PM :) Dripping moonlight for us all to enjoy. Good luck in the contest, Dr Sharma. Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 3, 2015 at 10:57 PM Thnx O sweet Eileen!

Andrea Dietrich July 3, 2015 at 1:41 PM great imagery!! Bet this will do well. Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 3, 2015 at 10:55 PM Thnx Andrea dear!

Aiyah Torres July 3, 2015 at 11:03 AM awesome choice of words for drunken moon, Dr. Sharma !! ^_^ still the best! :O)) Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 3, 2015 at 11:16 AM Thnx a lot Aiyah!

Lee Carter July 3, 2015 at 8:16 AM Love "dripping the moonlight" ! Good luck! Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 3, 2015 at 10:43 AM Thnx Lee!