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Drunken Moon

Drunken moon monstrous white crystal excited lolls in dark sky dripping the moonlight Haiku- 5/7/5 Written July 3rd, 2015 By Dr.Upma A.Sharma For contest "Drunken moon" by SKAT A

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Darlene Gifford

Date: 7/24/2015 6:18:00 AM

A great image! I can clearly see your moon. A 7. And congrats on your more than one contest wins.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/11/2015 1:10:00 AM

Dr Upma, Congratulations on your Drunken Moon haiku win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/11/2015 2:24:00 AM

Thnx PD !

Eve Roper

Date: 7/9/2015 9:39:00 AM

Wonderful description of the moon, Dr. Upma A. Sharma, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/11/2015 2:25:00 AM

Thnx Eve !

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/9/2015 7:07:00 AM

I enjoyed your poem Upma. I'm a bit behind on the contests but I'm glad I stopped by to read this one.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/11/2015 2:23:00 AM

Thanks Richard!

Julia Ward

Date: 7/9/2015 4:02:00 AM

Infectious humour... Well done on win. Julia, :))

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/9/2015 5:28:00 AM

thnx julia!

Tim Smith

Date: 7/8/2015 3:32:00 PM

Congrats Upma on this fine win

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/9/2015 1:20:00 AM

Thnx a lot Tim!

Paul Callus

Date: 7/8/2015 1:21:00 PM

Congratulations on your fine win, Upma! The last line is great! All the best. // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/9/2015 1:20:00 AM

Thnx a lot Paul!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/7/2015 11:51:00 PM

big congrats to you!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/8/2015 8:32:00 AM

Thnx Andrea!

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/7/2015 11:48:00 PM

Lovely, oozy animation. Well done, Dr Upma. Viv x

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/8/2015 8:36:00 AM

Thnx Viv!

Lee Carter

Date: 7/7/2015 11:38:00 PM

Nice win! Top of my list this one!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/8/2015 8:35:00 AM

Thnx Lee!

Skat A

Date: 7/7/2015 11:03:00 PM

Dr Upma, Congratulations, on your awesome Drunken Moon win... Thank you for supporting this contest... **SKAT**

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/8/2015 8:31:00 AM

Thanks a lot Skat!

Kelly Deschler

Date: 7/5/2015 10:10:00 PM

A nicely written haiku, Dr. Upma. I love the imagery! Good luck in SKAT's contest!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/5/2015 11:18:00 PM

Thnx a lot Kelly!

James Fraser

Date: 7/4/2015 12:11:00 PM

Beautifully penned Upma, and sure to do well in the contest, James :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/5/2015 1:10:00 AM

Thnx James! Appreciate ur kind visit n wishes!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/3/2015 5:54:00 PM

Dr Upma, wow that is shiny. Love the imagery. Good luck in the contest@-> LINDA <-@

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/3/2015 10:56:00 PM

Thnx for your kind support n good wishes always dear Linda!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/3/2015 4:40:00 PM

:) Dripping moonlight for us all to enjoy. Good luck in the contest, Dr Sharma.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/3/2015 10:57:00 PM

Thnx O sweet Eileen!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/3/2015 1:41:00 PM

great imagery!! Bet this will do well.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/3/2015 10:55:00 PM

Thnx Andrea dear!

Aiyah Torres

Date: 7/3/2015 11:03:00 AM

awesome choice of words for drunken moon, Dr. Sharma !! ^_^ still the best! :O))

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/3/2015 11:16:00 AM

Thnx a lot Aiyah!

Lee Carter

Date: 7/3/2015 8:16:00 AM

Love "dripping the moonlight" ! Good luck!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/3/2015 10:43:00 AM

Thnx Lee!