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Drunken Moon - Haiku

lightning bolts rip sky
                                                        moon disappears to get drunk
                                                        stygian gloom settles

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                                                        half-moon teases cloud
                                                        creeps through the sky drunkenly
                                                        light-dappled waters

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Eve Roper

Date: 7/5/2015 5:38:00 PM

Beautiful description, Josefina, a 7 . Hugs Eve

Josefina Costales
Date: 7/5/2015 11:07:00 PM

Thanks Eve...your comment is very encouraging, esp. I don't really know if I'm doing this haiku right.

Darlene Gifford

Date: 7/5/2015 12:16:00 AM

Hi! I liked your moon poems. It's hard to believe there was a man on the moon once. Neil Armstrong. When I look at the moon, I remember him. And thanks for visiting my "lonely Child" poem...~~Darlene