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Drunken Moon

~ Injustice Moon Among Us ~


deeper than twilight
the moon to moon afterglow
a wave crush the mood
***
Stereotype motion
Two face under water 
Human injury 


(Senryu of Being Misjudged)

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Evangeline Novio

Date: 7/16/2016 3:37:00 AM

It's really not what we see but how we see. Engaging.

Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 2/19/2018 2:23:00 AM

true

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 6/28/2016 12:46:00 PM

Nice..you express things so well in little words..I find this form very challenging! :D

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 5/14/2016 5:12:00 PM

innit great to be human !

Diana Bosa

Date: 3/20/2016 3:30:00 PM

Superb! I can see now, why you recommended this form. :-))))

Vladislav Raven

Date: 2/13/2016 7:30:00 PM

Hi Linda, isn't it many times we are misjudged by our actions. This Senryu shall does say it all Linda. A thought provoking write written by a golden pen. I find these shorter forms very difficult Linda but you seem to master them well. A seven for this Senryu, Love Vlad.

Cherl Dunn

Date: 9/16/2015 10:42:00 PM

Dear Linda Love the moon imagery my dear friend, I'm almost caught all the way up with you, so lets finish this wonderment of inspirational work of my Linda the destroyer lol, this is great and I do love the first verse the best very inspirational, cheri

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 9/4/2015 6:53:00 PM

Excellent pen Linda! A very deep Senryu duet, you've painted here in this drunken moon piece.A 7!And thank you Linda so much for visiting my page and all very much I appreciate it my friend:)In his light, God bless you!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!:) D

Jacob Frey

Date: 8/27/2015 12:46:00 PM

Love this one, last two lines are just delightful

Edlynn Nau

Date: 8/13/2015 2:37:00 AM

Yes this poem is like quicksilver...it moves when you try to touch it!

Gary Dye

Date: 8/4/2015 5:05:00 PM

totally true2 @ one of the best poems I have ever read awesome @ thank u

Eric Boddie

Date: 7/31/2015 10:37:00 AM

interesting selection....this belongs in the thought provoking section....two face under water, human injury....that touches in many ways but most of all furiously....

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/28/2015 12:31:00 AM

Awesome pen PD n a superb win ! Big congrats!

Bl Devnath

Date: 7/26/2015 3:27:00 PM

A great congrats on POTW my lovely *friend. Loved always,bl

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/26/2015 9:47:00 AM

This write of yours made me think, pd-- of several scenarios, and I like that. This is something I think I'd go back to and try to read into it again and get something else entirely the next time around. How are you? The kids and grandkids? I hope you have a great week ahead, summer over there already, right <3 --me just being a mushroom here, as usual

Len Gasun

Date: 7/26/2015 9:28:00 AM

Hello everdearest sis and BFF of mine! Stopping by to enjoy once again this superb haiku of yours and to extend my heartfelt congratulations on your win!Many hugs and cheers! Thank you so much again for sharing and, may I also have this chance dearest sis of mine to thank you for giving special time/day for my poems. My heart was fattened and I'm so touched by your thoughtfulness, loving gestures and wonderful words (tears of joy). You're still my BEST. I love and miss you much. forever, Leo