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~ Injustice Moon Among Us ~

deeper than twilight
the moon to moon afterglow
a wave crush the mood
Stereotype motion
Two face under water 
Human injury 

(Senryu of Being Misjudged)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Date: 7/16/2016 3:37:00 AM
It's really not what we see but how we see. Engaging.
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Date: 2/19/2018 2:23:00 AM
Date: 6/28/2016 12:46:00 PM express things so well in little words..I find this form very challenging! :D
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Date: 5/14/2016 5:12:00 PM
innit great to be human !
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Date: 3/20/2016 3:30:00 PM
Superb! I can see now, why you recommended this form. :-))))
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Date: 2/26/2016 9:45:00 AM
wao...short and precise, i'm loving this community
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Date: 2/13/2016 7:30:00 PM
Hi Linda, isn't it many times we are misjudged by our actions. This Senryu shall does say it all Linda. A thought provoking write written by a golden pen. I find these shorter forms very difficult Linda but you seem to master them well. A seven for this Senryu, Love Vlad.
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Date: 9/16/2015 10:42:00 PM
Dear Linda Love the moon imagery my dear friend, I'm almost caught all the way up with you, so lets finish this wonderment of inspirational work of my Linda the destroyer lol, this is great and I do love the first verse the best very inspirational, cheri
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Date: 9/4/2015 6:53:00 PM
Excellent pen Linda! A very deep Senryu duet, you've painted here in this drunken moon piece.A 7!And thank you Linda so much for visiting my page and all very much I appreciate it my friend:)In his light, God bless you!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!:) D
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Date: 8/27/2015 12:46:00 PM
Love this one, last two lines are just delightful
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Date: 8/13/2015 2:37:00 AM
Yes this poem is like moves when you try to touch it!
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Date: 8/4/2015 5:05:00 PM
totally true2 @ one of the best poems I have ever read awesome @ thank u
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Date: 8/1/2015 7:53:00 PM
Linda.. Congrats on your winning Senyru!
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Date: 7/31/2015 10:37:00 AM
interesting selection....this belongs in the thought provoking section....two face under water, human injury....that touches in many ways but most of all furiously....
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Date: 7/28/2015 12:31:00 AM
Awesome pen PD n a superb win ! Big congrats!
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Date: 7/26/2015 3:27:00 PM
A great congrats on POTW my lovely *friend. Loved always,bl
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Date: 7/26/2015 9:47:00 AM
This write of yours made me think, pd-- of several scenarios, and I like that. This is something I think I'd go back to and try to read into it again and get something else entirely the next time around. How are you? The kids and grandkids? I hope you have a great week ahead, summer over there already, right <3 --me just being a mushroom here, as usual
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Date: 7/26/2015 9:28:00 AM
Hello everdearest sis and BFF of mine! Stopping by to enjoy once again this superb haiku of yours and to extend my heartfelt congratulations on your win!Many hugs and cheers! Thank you so much again for sharing and, may I also have this chance dearest sis of mine to thank you for giving special time/day for my poems. My heart was fattened and I'm so touched by your thoughtfulness, loving gestures and wonderful words (tears of joy). You're still my BEST. I love and miss you much. forever, Leo
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Date: 7/26/2015 3:57:00 AM
congrats Linda. this is a great win. good day
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Date: 7/24/2015 10:48:00 PM
PD, I just stopped by to say congratulations on your awesome win:-)Alexis
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Date: 7/24/2015 10:07:00 PM
Congratulations, dear Linda, on your excellent win for this wonderful Senryu! Love, Pandita
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Date: 7/24/2015 4:50:00 PM
Sweet & Sweet :) Sid
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Date: 7/24/2015 3:44:00 PM
Beautiful piece,great poetess. Congrats on your lovely win in this contest.....
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Date: 7/24/2015 3:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your beautiful win. Your insight is amazing. SuZ
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Date: 7/24/2015 11:29:00 AM
I love the impact you have presented in this poem. Congratulations on your win a seven. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/24/2015 10:31:00 AM
Congratulations, Linda! hugs
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