Drunk Drivers

Rain whipped by,
And the wipers tasked with maintaining sight struggled to keep up. 
Despite the wiper’s determination though,
the driver needed not look,
As in his inebriation his control would merely worsen with sight.

The wheels upon which he rode turned quickly,
yet slid along the unstable gravel.
And as the driver lost consciousness,
The road gave way just in time to spite his drunkenness.

First the headlight cracked,
Then the metal upon which the car was supported bent and split.
And finally, the separation between the derelict and his storm gave way:
As the window shattered beyond recognition.
  
Now,
Rested upon an old willow,
The manifestation of all inadequacies lay;
A young man,
who failed to drive the car upon which fate destined him,
Met his end -
in introduction to the monsters of his irresolution.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Roni Avatar
July 30, 2026 at 6:02 AM
An exceptional work. Thank you for sharing.
Agustin Avatar
May 28, 2026 at 3:32 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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