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Drowning In the Ebon Sky

fragile b r e a k of dawn ascends, crickets fall asleep, the sun beams in morn’s glory. heartbreak calls me, for I am awakened by its lamented marvel- no time to rest when loneliness runs through your veins. sightless eyes peek through the sill and yet, I am forever seeking more than life offers. for I am but a resounding aria of t e m p e r a m e n t a l mania, encompassed by a turbulent existence of lapses in judgement. silhouetted etchings of love lost resound in raging r e m o r s e, a temperament I cannot control- forever descending into forsaken lonely memories. harsh break of eventide ascends, crickets awaken to moonlit stars- I hear the weeping of willows m o u r n i n g their broken branches… and I drown in the ebon sky Written: June 30, 2018

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Date: 7/27/2018 5:17:00 PM
Back to congratulate you again for your win again. :)
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Date: 7/26/2018 7:06:00 PM
Laura, congratulations on your win in my contest, I love your creativity in writing this fav !
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Date: 7/25/2018 12:11:00 PM
Wonderful write LuLoo, congratulations...
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Date: 7/25/2018 6:03:00 AM
Beautiful write, Laura! Congratulations on your win...hugs // Charlie
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Date: 7/24/2018 10:15:00 PM
CONGRATS on your win with this moving description of unrelenting loneliness, Laura! Janice
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Date: 7/24/2018 7:42:00 PM
Sad, but so beautifully expressed, Laura. Congratulations on your First Place win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/5/2018 10:15:00 PM
Lovely, Laura. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/2/2018 7:51:00 PM
This lovely, yet rather melancholy poem is wonderful Laura ! Congratulations to you!
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Date: 7/2/2018 6:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this poem of introspection cleverly penned. Well done!
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Date: 6/30/2018 9:29:00 PM
Gorgeous verse, Laura Loo! Mesmerizing :)
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Lu Loo
Date: 7/1/2018 10:12:00 AM
aww thank you so much sweet Laura :)-luloo
Date: 6/30/2018 5:53:00 PM
How do you know me so well, LL, LOL. Tonight I'll drown with you.
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Lu Loo
Date: 7/1/2018 10:11:00 AM
thank you so much! :)-luloo

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