Drowning In the Ebon Sky

fragile   b r e a k    of dawn ascends,
crickets fall asleep,
            the sun beams in morn’s glory.

heartbreak calls me, 
for I am awakened by its lamented
              marvel-
no time to rest when loneliness
       runs through your veins.

sightless eyes peek through the sill
and yet, I am forever seeking more
         than life offers.
for I am but a resounding aria of 
t e m p e r a m e n t a l   mania, 
encompassed by a turbulent existence
               of lapses in judgement.

silhouetted etchings of love lost
   resound in raging  r e m o r s e,
a temperament I cannot control-
forever     descending     into     forsaken     lonely     memories. 

harsh break of eventide ascends,
     crickets awaken to moonlit stars-
I hear the weeping of willows
   m o u r n i n g  their broken branches…
                   and I drown in the ebon sky



Written: June 30, 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gentry Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 5:17 PM
Back to congratulate you again for your win again. :)
La France Avatar
July 26, 2018 at 7:06 PM
Laura, congratulations on your win in my contest, I love your creativity in writing this fav !
Smith Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 12:11 PM
Wonderful write LuLoo, congratulations...
Messina Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 6:03 AM
Beautiful write, Laura! Congratulations on your win...hugs // Charlie
Canerdy Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 10:15 PM
CONGRATS on your win with this moving description of unrelenting loneliness, Laura! Janice
Haight Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 7:42 PM
Sad, but so beautifully expressed, Laura. Congratulations on your First Place win! Hugs, Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 10:15 PM
Lovely, Laura. Congrats on your win.
Richards Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 7:51 PM
This lovely, yet rather melancholy poem is wonderful Laura ! Congratulations to you!
Gentry Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 6:09 PM
Congratulations on your win with this poem of introspection cleverly penned. Well done!
Leiser Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 9:29 PM
Gorgeous verse, Laura Loo! Mesmerizing :)
Scars Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 10:12 AM
aww thank you so much sweet Laura :)-luloo
Wanter Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 5:53 PM
How do you know me so well, LL, LOL. Tonight I'll drown with you.
Scars Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 10:11 AM
thank you so much! :)-luloo
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