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Drowning

Drowning in thoughts Provoked by every emotion You caused in me Was like attempting To swim in the ocean When you don't know how. The insecurity and fear Would crash over head Like a wave Trying to push me down Then the love and happiness Would give air To my watered lungs Just as doubt would hit Like a cramp causing Me to sink a little further And finally bliss So shorty lived As the image of you You're smile Your kiss Filling my shaking bones With warmth.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/22/2015 4:06:00 PM
relationships go up and down....but the thing that leaves me so astound....is that we put up with the bs for far too long....are we really that lonely or do we really think we are that strong....great write Sybil....;)
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Eric Boddie
Date: 10/22/2015 4:12:00 PM
I only write the truth and thank you for inspiring it....;)
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Sybil Berry
Date: 10/22/2015 4:08:00 PM
Thank you and isn't that the truth! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 8/10/2015 11:21:00 PM
SYBIL, a wonderful read.... LOVE *SKAT*
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Sybil Berry
Date: 8/10/2015 11:25:00 PM
Thank you very much
Date: 3/5/2015 2:50:00 PM
Love it! Explains how I feel sometimes.
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Sybil Berry
Date: 3/5/2015 3:05:00 PM
Thank you!!!

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