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Drowning

I can't breath, everything is going black, why does life hate me? I don't want this, I still can't breath Suffocation is taking me everything is starting to leave, but then I see light no I'm not dead someone Is pulling me up, I fall in love then they throw me back in, i'm suffocating again, I'm losing a fight They say love is will kill you, they're right now I'm at the bottom, I lost the fight, drowning

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Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 6/20/2019 3:49:00 PM

Fine write Amber, so well penned, look forward to more from you and welcome to PS. Have a great day, Gordon

Estela Canama

Date: 6/20/2019 10:37:00 AM

Great expression, Amber. Living here on earth is never easy. Let us strive to live and surmount the different struggles with faith in our hearts that we are indeed, born unique and with a special purpose. You can achieve the desires of your heart by believing on yourself. And keep on working for it no matter what. Cheers!

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 6/8/2019 9:04:00 AM

No one s life is perfect, you must decide what you want in life and then according to that one aim, you need to frame your whole life, difficulty always comes but if you don't give up and eventually acheives your dream, fate will kiss your toes then. This is yet another beautiful poem from you and I really enjoyed reading this. There are many wondering poets here, if you will comment on their poem, in return they will comment on yours and that's how other poets will know about you, good luck