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Drowning

I can't breath, everything
is going black, why does
life hate me? I don't want
this, I still can't breath

Suffocation is taking me
everything is starting to 
leave, but then I see light
no I'm not dead someone

Is pulling me up, I fall in
love then they throw me
back in, i'm suffocating 
again, I'm losing a fight

They say love is will
kill you, they're right
now I'm at the bottom,
I lost the fight, drowning

Copyright © Amber Henderson | Year Posted 2019

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Gordon Mcconnell Date: 6/20/2019 3:49:00 PM Fine write Amber, so well penned, look forward to more from you and welcome to PS. Have a great day, Gordon Login to Reply

Estela Canama Date: 6/20/2019 10:37:00 AM Great expression, Amber. Living here on earth is never easy. Let us strive to live and surmount the different struggles with faith in our hearts that we are indeed, born unique and with a special purpose. You can achieve the desires of your heart by believing on yourself. And keep on working for it no matter what. Cheers! Login to Reply

Faraz Ajmal Date: 6/8/2019 9:04:00 AM No one s life is perfect, you must decide what you want in life and then according to that one aim, you need to frame your whole life, difficulty always comes but if you don't give up and eventually acheives your dream, fate will kiss your toes then. This is yet another beautiful poem from you and I really enjoyed reading this. There are many wondering poets here, if you will comment on their poem, in return they will comment on yours and that's how other poets will know about you, good luck Login to Reply