Drought

dry leaves curled under nature turns brown and lifeless earth cries out for relief P.R.Deremer

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Joan Donnelly Ellis

Date: 10/21/2015 9:34:00 AM

WELL DONE Pam

Pam Deremer
Date: 10/21/2015 12:42:00 PM

Thank you for all the poems of mine you have read.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/3/2015 9:40:00 AM

Earth's anguish can be clearly felt; the description of nature withering is ably presented. An impressive write. // paul

Pam Deremer
Date: 10/3/2015 1:36:00 PM

Thank.you for your comment and for the soup mail. I read about Haiku and it did say that way back it was done with 5/6/5 syllables it said in modern Haiku poems it is 6/7/6.

Kevin Leake

Date: 9/10/2015 3:30:00 PM

Great Haiku Pam, Enjoyed this Best Wishes Kevin

Pam Deremer
Date: 9/10/2015 3:53:00 PM

Thank you!