Drought

dry leaves curled under

nature turns brown and lifeless

earth cries out for relief


                P.R.Deremer

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Joan Donnelly Ellis

October 21, 2015 at 9:34 AM

WELL DONE Pam

Pam Deremer

October 21, 2015 at 12:42 PM

Thank you for all the poems of mine you have read.

Paul Callus

October 3, 2015 at 9:40 AM

Earth's anguish can be clearly felt; the description of nature withering is ably presented. An impressive write. // paul

Pam Deremer

October 3, 2015 at 1:36 PM

Thank.you for your comment and for the soup mail. I read about Haiku and it did say that way back it was done with 5/6/5 syllables it said in modern Haiku poems it is 6/7/6.