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Dropping Off the Face

Rain falling around— Put all my feelings down; hit By the crowd, shifting Air for power—but clearer Then I stall for the hour.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 2/28/2023 12:24:00 PM
Very good, Paige!
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Date: 2/22/2023 11:19:00 AM
I enjoy anything that makes my imagination wander and this piece absolutely does that very well penned! I truly enjoy the way you invoke the use of elements. Much reverence A.S.
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