Driving

I take a drive in the woods. Viewing beauty all around Relaxed, calm until I see. An empty fuel gage.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/9/2010 9:06:00 AM

Congratulations Cecil on your win in Barbara Gorelick's contest "Your Favorite Form Of Transportation". Love, Carol

Brandee Augustus

Date: 8/8/2010 8:38:00 PM

Nice!!!!!! I think this is a form of poetry most drivers can speak out loud on a regular basis. Congratulations on getting a placement with this winner!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/6/2010 9:37:00 PM

haha, well, so this is a dodoitsu!! Congrats on your win, Cecil. LUv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/6/2010 8:21:00 AM

Very witty, Cecil!! Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/5/2010 9:46:00 PM

Congrats on your HM win, Cecil

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/5/2010 9:32:00 PM

Congrats Cecil on your HM in BG's contest .. luv driving myself..and its a great write for a special honor..with luv..

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/5/2010 9:24:00 PM

thank you for participating in my contest. I like your use of a form we dont see very often. BG

Scarlett Sepulvado Anderson

Date: 8/3/2010 10:51:00 PM

Dang it cant go anywhere without that gasoline. cute little Dodoitsu. Have a great day! Scarlett

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 8/1/2010 10:17:00 PM

Dodoitsu!!?? (goes to poetry form straight away) very cool and yupp that sucks when that happens