Driving

I take a drive in the woods.
Viewing beauty all around
Relaxed, calm until I see.
An empty fuel gage.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
August 9, 2010 at 9:06 AM
Congratulations Cecil on your win in Barbara Gorelick's contest "Your Favorite Form Of Transportation". Love, Carol
Augustus Avatar
August 8, 2010 at 8:38 PM
Nice!!!!!! I think this is a form of poetry most drivers can speak out loud on a regular basis. Congratulations on getting a placement with this winner!
Dietrich Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 9:37 PM
haha, well, so this is a dodoitsu!! Congrats on your win, Cecil. LUv, Andrea
Devonshire Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 8:21 AM
Very witty, Cecil!! Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 9:46 PM
Congrats on your HM win, Cecil
Sweetheart Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 9:32 PM
Congrats Cecil on your HM in BG's contest .. luv driving myself..and its a great write for a special honor..with luv..
Gorelick Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 9:24 PM
thank you for participating in my contest. I like your use of a form we dont see very often. BG
Sepulvado Anderson Avatar
August 3, 2010 at 10:51 PM
Dang it cant go anywhere without that gasoline. cute little Dodoitsu. Have a great day! Scarlett
Arteaga Avatar
August 1, 2010 at 10:17 PM
Dodoitsu!!?? (goes to poetry form straight away) very cool and yupp that sucks when that happens
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