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Drive Thru Beauty

May I take your order, please: I want two double cheeseburgers, and a large side of fries Plus, two chocolate milkshakes with vanilla latte eyes We’re celebrating today, me and my drive-thru beauty She’s my fast food lovin’ baby, and I wouldn’t want her no other way She serves good lovin’ that’s extra saucy, her kisses has a lot of spicy zing I’m wrapped around her finger, like a hot jalapeño onion ring Give me two double cheeseburgers, and some large, crispy fries Plus, two chocolate milkshakes with vanilla latte eyes That’s my baby’s special order, y’see ... she was eating that when she first met me I fell in love with her from the first bite, on that late, late drive-thru night She’s my drive-thru beauty, my fast food lovin’ baby She’s my happy meal cutie, I wouldn’t want her any other way We’ll have two double cheeseburgers, and a big portion of golden fries Plus, two chocolate milkshakes with pure vanilla latte eyes

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Date: 6/4/2017 7:34:00 PM
What a "happy meal poem"! It made me hungry. LOL Anyway, I enjoyed it a lot. P.S. Just a little suggestion, Freddie (I hope you don't mind): in the 3rd verse, change "has" to "have".
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Date: 6/4/2017 6:10:00 PM
Hi Freddie, I really enjoyed this fun and creative write. However, I it did make kind of hungry. This most definitely put a smile on my face. I would have given you a seven:-) Alexis
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Date: 6/4/2017 6:09:00 PM
Hi Freddie, I really enjoyed this fun and creative write. However, I it did make kind of hungry. This most definitely put a smile on my face. I would have given you a seven:-) Alexis
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Date: 6/4/2017 12:12:00 AM
Fun fun and more fun!! You added a smile to my evening Freddie.
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Date: 6/3/2017 8:22:00 AM
This is such a creative fun poem Freddie! I really enjoyed it :)
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Date: 6/3/2017 5:51:00 AM
Good Morning Freddie. This entry was the smile for the day. Honestly. It is a feel good entry for certain. I very much enjoyed your expression and repetition. It was perfectly executed. I found this entry creative starting with the marvelous title to which you did not stray. Allow me to say happy eating and happy drive thru now and always. Well done entirely. -- m a r v e l o u s --
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Date: 6/3/2017 5:37:00 AM
resplendent with creative pleasure ... lovely ...
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