Freddie Robinson Jr. Poet Light Verse

Drive Thru Beauty

May I take your order, please:


I want two double cheeseburgers,
and a large side of fries
Plus, two chocolate milkshakes
with vanilla latte eyes

We’re celebrating today,
me and my drive-thru beauty
She’s my fast food lovin’ baby,
and I wouldn’t want her no other way

She serves good lovin’ that’s extra saucy,
her kisses has a lot of spicy zing
I’m wrapped around her finger,
like a hot jalapeño onion ring 

Give me two double cheeseburgers,
and some large, crispy fries
Plus, two chocolate milkshakes
with vanilla latte eyes

That’s my baby’s special order, y’see ... 
she was eating that when she first met me
I fell in love with her from the first bite,
on that late, late drive-thru night 

She’s my drive-thru beauty,
my fast food lovin’ baby
She’s my happy meal cutie,
I wouldn’t want her any other way

We’ll have two double cheeseburgers,
and a big portion of golden fries
Plus, two chocolate milkshakes
with pure vanilla latte eyes

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Carole Duet June 4, 2017 at 7:34 PM What a "happy meal poem"! It made me hungry. LOL Anyway, I enjoyed it a lot. P.S. Just a little suggestion, Freddie (I hope you don't mind): in the 3rd verse, change "has" to "have".

Alexis Y. June 4, 2017 at 6:10 PM Hi Freddie, I really enjoyed this fun and creative write. However, I it did make kind of hungry. This most definitely put a smile on my face. I would have given you a seven:-) Alexis

Alexis Y. June 4, 2017 at 6:09 PM Hi Freddie, I really enjoyed this fun and creative write. However, I it did make kind of hungry. This most definitely put a smile on my face. I would have given you a seven:-) Alexis

Richard Lamoureux June 4, 2017 at 12:12 AM Fun fun and more fun!! You added a smile to my evening Freddie.

Heidi Sands June 3, 2017 at 8:22 AM This is such a creative fun poem Freddie! I really enjoyed it :)

Lisa Ricci June 3, 2017 at 5:51 AM Good Morning Freddie. This entry was the smile for the day. Honestly. It is a feel good entry for certain. I very much enjoyed your expression and repetition. It was perfectly executed. I found this entry creative starting with the marvelous title to which you did not stray. Allow me to say happy eating and happy drive thru now and always. Well done entirely. -- m a r v e l o u s --

Probir Gupta June 3, 2017 at 5:37 AM resplendent with creative pleasure ... lovely ...