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"DRIVE" Imperial bulltwang oligarchy number crunching serial winners cornflake box cracker jacks sing some songs that cut some flack Pats on back helps cut the slack from wind ringing chimes hot air bumcracks anonymous blast dredging up saccharine ditties from the past tolling bells zero oceans fathoms zero five deep dive swallows air chirping feathers fly ring-a-round-the-rosies sing-a-song of posies bubbling honey bee hive. Serious insects marching bands beating drums semi-alive hour glass running out of sand Metronome kisses missing time keep on working for the Man. Black Balls White Ball rolling dreams quicksand sinking out of rhyme Take a walk in the forrest stand tall Rain comes dance some turn your face to Number One Brave. Get in the car wave your hand foot flat to the floor burn the engines face to sun put dark glasses on what's to be won? survive... listen to silence DRIVE. (Lovejoy-Burton/2018 Jan) White Rose Parade/Lady of the Sunshine (Angus Stone) https://youtu.be/h0njhzs2bDA Smoking Gun/Lady of the Sunshine (Angus Stone) https://youtu.be/K6aLm8aY6fE

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Date: 1/3/2018 1:37:00 PM
MUSIC FOR DRIVING - "TOMCATS SCREAMING OUTSIDE", Roland Orzabel. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LxkYMCA104o
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Date: 1/3/2018 12:59:00 PM
I thought all poetry was freedom poetry and ad-libbing. Thank you for the compliment Arturo. LLB
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Date: 1/3/2018 12:19:00 PM
It's freedom poetry...almost like ad-libbing ... I like it...All blessings to you Leanne
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