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Drinking Remember the evening before the open mic When we went to that pizza place in the Village And bought two beers Wrapped in brown paper bags? We guzzled as we Walked city streets Carrying our precious guitars, Giggling like misbehaving schoolgirls And how about that Passover When I came to visit And all you had in the house was Manishewitz wine? The sweetest, most vile concoction! Still, we drank and laughed As though it were the finest Bordeaux You were a Merlot Ho I was a White Zinfandel aficionado We enjoyed our bottles While eating the birthday dinner You'd made in my honor Complete with chocolate cake You read to me from your journal About your trip to Nepal Later, we watched Absolutely Fabulous And I loved hearing you laugh Whenever drunken Patsy keeled over Now that you live in Atlanta I have no more than a couple of beers a year And a glass of wine is reserved For special occasions But whenever you were near I would drink you in And you always made me giddy

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/30/2009 7:05:00 AM
What a loss. I also lost a friend or two to moving away. In all the time we drank together I can't recall anything so low as Manischewitz (spelling?) What a joy to find someone who likes Greek myth. I've had very good reports on the stuff from very good editors....not much response from the soup. Love, daver
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Date: 1/22/2009 4:56:00 PM
AB FAB! you don't have to drink to enjoy it. they were fabulous. and that sexy blond patsy always a turn on. thanks for the memories. john
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Date: 1/22/2009 2:45:00 PM
Loved the last verse made all the rest of it blanch. Not sure why you are capitalizing the first word of the line? I did for years. No idea why either. I think I would have enjoyed a bit of end of sentence or end of thought punctuation. Again, I have no idea if there are any real rules in regard to this? Luv Debbie
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Date: 1/21/2009 1:02:00 PM
A beautiful narrative. Life affirming. The flow is outstanding and has a feel of walking to it. I could imagine this accompanying a film. The penultimate stanza is great. It could work as a poem in itself. I love the use of language. It suggests that you have a good ear as you group words together in a natural way.
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