Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Lyric

Drink a Shot of Kiss

DRINK A SHOT OF KISS

peeking inside a mouth
I see a white fence some big, some stout
as my small nose gets a `lil bit closer, yes! closer!
Smell of berries, so fresh hmmmmn! (without sear)

Lips of supple soft and red
they twitch and protrude
lingering for quite awhile
sipping sweetness like of pies

I breathe, deep and slow, deep and slow
jive and brush of lips let it flow...
Palms now on high fever, enticed
walking slow to the head, holding it, pause!

Eyes on one key locked, we stare
savoring the minutes of the magic fair..
Not enough, hungry for more, the pair of lips
again, move, move , a space without air

Left to right
Up and down
on and on
on and on

TASTING... 
SUMMONING...
BITING...
NIBBLING...

Heartbeats rush to drum: lub! dub! lub! dub!
Ah! even the lungs rush to suck and blow...
More and more wanting the magic not to end
Others, eyes are shut, some peek in slits

Drinking each minutes of time
as feelings rush, pop like firecrackers
mind and body sings a single rhyme....
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CONTEST NAME: LEAST VIEWS
Contest Sponsor: Casarah Nance
~~2nd Place~~
Written: June 23, 2013
Revised: September 13, 2015

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 16, 2015 at 1:46 AM Wonderful imagery Olive! Congrats on big win!

Sandra Haight September 15, 2015 at 2:47 PM Amazing intricate imagery about a kiss, Olive! Congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra

Skat A September 15, 2015 at 2:15 PM sweet win. SKAT

Michael Tor September 15, 2015 at 6:03 AM Olive great win. Congratulations.xx

Casarah Nance September 14, 2015 at 6:12 PM Very ..wow... great write, thanks for entering it!

James Fraser July 26, 2014 at 2:59 PM Kissing, has so much meaning in a relationship. Loved this poem, as it has been lived by trillions of people, James :)

Arthur Vaso May 30, 2014 at 10:05 PM Lovely, a kiss is meant to bring 2 people so close together they cant see the faults of each other!!!! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 2, 2014 at 6:03 AM weee.. kiss and make up :O?!!! thanks for the comment Art.. :)

Paul Callus April 20, 2014 at 1:01 PM Hi Olive_eloi :) How come nobody commented on this lovely poem!! Never looked at kissing from this angle before :) now take another quick breathe......:) // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 20, 2014 at 1:54 PM hahahaha PAul whatta.. :D cause maybe they have not kiss as like that or they never have felt the magic within a kiss.. :D loool.. How come you tried this prose.. :D im laughing lol as I read it.. Cna't believe I'm the one who wrote this .. :P