Drink a Shot of Kiss

DRINK A SHOT OF KISS peeking inside a mouth I see a white fence some big, some stout as my small nose gets a `lil bit closer, yes! closer! Smell of berries, so fresh hmmmmn! (without sear) Lips of supple soft and red they twitch and protrude lingering for quite awhile sipping sweetness like of pies I breathe, deep and slow, deep and slow jive and brush of lips let it flow... Palms now on high fever, enticed walking slow to the head, holding it, pause! Eyes on one key locked, we stare savoring the minutes of the magic fair.. Not enough, hungry for more, the pair of lips again, move, move , a space without air Left to right Up and down on and on on and on TASTING... SUMMONING... BITING... NIBBLING... Heartbeats rush to drum: lub! dub! lub! dub! Ah! even the lungs rush to suck and blow... More and more wanting the magic not to end Others, eyes are shut, some peek in slits Drinking each minutes of time as feelings rush, pop like firecrackers mind and body sings a single rhyme.... ____________________________________________________________ CONTEST NAME: LEAST VIEWS Contest Sponsor: Casarah Nance ~~2nd Place~~ Written: June 23, 2013 Revised: September 13, 2015

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Date: 9/16/2015 1:46:00 AM
Wonderful imagery Olive! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 9/15/2015 2:47:00 PM
Amazing intricate imagery about a kiss, Olive! Congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/15/2015 2:15:00 PM
sweet win. SKAT
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Date: 9/15/2015 6:03:00 AM
Olive great win. Congratulations.xx
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Date: 9/14/2015 6:12:00 PM
Very ..wow... great write, thanks for entering it!
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Date: 7/26/2014 2:59:00 PM
Kissing, has so much meaning in a relationship. Loved this poem, as it has been lived by trillions of people, James :)
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Date: 5/30/2014 10:05:00 PM
Lovely, a kiss is meant to bring 2 people so close together they cant see the faults of each other!!!!
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/2/2014 6:03:00 AM
weee.. kiss and make up :O?!!! thanks for the comment Art.. :)
Date: 4/20/2014 1:01:00 PM
Hi Olive_eloi :) How come nobody commented on this lovely poem!! Never looked at kissing from this angle before :) now take another quick breathe......:) // paul
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/20/2014 1:54:00 PM
hahahaha PAul whatta.. :D cause maybe they have not kiss as like that or they never have felt the magic within a kiss.. :D loool.. How come you tried this prose.. :D im laughing lol as I read it.. Cna't believe I'm the one who wrote this .. :P
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