Drink

I do not have the drink Drink itself has me! Controls me when I am out of control Reduces my stresses It helps to forget you I salute alcohol And a million thanks to its inventor Neither wine harmful nor me Evil is your world What is the purpose of life? Work, husband, and stress! Everyone treats me as a waiter I was always ordered Money has purchased my love, The world of my care He accepts me as I am share my woe He is in my blood We can not live separately I am in love with alcohol And I respect its inventor

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/27/2013 5:27:00 PM

well, I hope this one is all in fun. Dont' want you to be an alcoholic! I like your zest for life as portrayed in your love for wine here.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 9/8/2013 7:04:00 AM

It's a very funny world. I liked this work a lot. We are all in debt to alcohol. It does have a very pleasing effect for those of us who can use it in moderation. What is life for? That is a decision each of us has to make. But I hope you will continue to write.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/7/2013 3:39:00 PM

Hi Litan, wow! praising the inventor. much to ponder on. I wish to take control of what controls me. we can accept the way we are... well done. I have to read another from you.. :-) always ~Linda

Litan Dey
Date: 9/7/2013 10:08:00 PM

Yea you are right and thank you so much for your continuous appreciation and love to my works.........Have a lovely sunday.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/7/2013 7:59:00 AM

- Live your life with joy my friend, Litan .... A well written poem! - I still breathe .... I am not 100 !! - Thank you for visiting my poem! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/7/2013 11:09:00 AM

.... submitted in response to S-mail (in inbox) - Anne-Lise :)

Litan Dey
Date: 9/7/2013 8:37:00 AM

I hope you have more breathe to give air to poetrysoup and its members.Thank you............