Drifts and Promises

Your sweet breaths and perfumes provoke so,
have I found love in this drift of circumstance?

DO you love me? If so, pray, swear it on the tireless sea,
whose thrashing cold, intemperate waters will last forever. 

I swear it freely, on the sea, on breath, and on life itself 
- may both be forfit should my vow prove shallow perjury.

As pronounced vows become curses, if they be lies, 
truth only ripens, its harvest yielding the sweetest fruit
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Gondolf Avatar
March 14, 2023 at 2:39 AM
This definitely has a Shakespearean feel to it, Anais, nice writing!
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