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Written on May 14, 2025

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solemn thoughts meanderings wandering over the night stars glistening on seas of ebony nocturnal whispers, reflections in moonlight inklings stars hesitant to glow, where the past peels back layers of discord naked, scars boldly weeping remembering… darkness is a color faded, distant almost a prayer for the moment before the heart’s snow falls, melancholic and bitter like the wind autumn’s rhythmic story playing softly gentle as the sun’s smile blessing away the night who blends silence and a weary taste of misery stars wink, like an aching memory crazed, black as the sea who tells me I’m lost amid the clouds where hope winces and then rides waves of distant prayers praising… night’s stark laughter a stillness blowing over my spirit winsome and endless soothing through the fog a lonely dewdrop dripping on the earth on the rose on the petals wishing, wistfully crying to the touch of memories, rushing in a cold wind like October vibrant and colorful shading the grass silencing the past reminding me this time cannot last… freely drawing images grace penetrating seasons of praise in the distance an ache vehement this stays, the blessing rising from the ashes of a moonlit story, hesitant whispering on the still breaking through the thoughts healing the night of its doubts restoring the beautiful in the skies where answers are burning, questions unheard…. victory a star fades and the night cries tempting my faith reminding me why… the story is old and I know it is pure gold the silence – so bold memorizing, surrendering to the seas of a distant tear the fear, losing what is meant for me, the One who died on a tree saving me from hell saving me from me saving me so I see… this is the reason I believe for every moment that I breathe for every morning each dawn still grieves but shines, despite the mystery and He blesses me in spite of the darkness in spite of the ebony waves of grief in spite of me in spite of me… Oh, God – dear God, I believe!

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Date: 5/14/2025 11:52:00 AM
Beautifully written...like a winding, meandering path as each new turn reveals an intimate truth until at last that truth is belief, belief in God Himself...well done, my friend... ~tolbert~
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