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Drifting

thoughts
bubbles
escaping
gone from my head
evaporated
dissipated
vanishing
into thin air
discharged
detonated
leaving
a void behind
a vacancy
mere grains of sand

creating
designing
my inner zen garden



AP: 3rd place 2020

Posted on December 26, 2018

Copyright © Line Gauthier | Year Posted 2018

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Michelle Faulkner Date: 12/27/2018 5:36:00 PM My 'thought bubbles' escape far too much, like your description of trying to gather the fragments to create your garden! Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 12/27/2018 9:16:00 PM Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Michelle.

Gershon Wolf Date: 12/26/2018 10:06:00 PM Your free verse style is so filled with stimulating images these days. Each line adds more and more to those bubbles. It all makes for very enjoyable reader experiences. Thank you for penning such wondrous lines. Best always, Gershon Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 12/26/2018 10:44:00 PM Thank you for your wonderful visit and compliment, Gershon.

Bernard Chan Date: 12/26/2018 7:36:00 PM An inner zen garden would be the ultimate prize. Very nice, Line. Happy holidays! Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 12/26/2018 9:13:00 PM Thank you so much, Bernard, for your lovely visit and comment.