Drifting

thoughts bubbles escaping gone from my head evaporated dissipated vanishing into thin air discharged detonated leaving a void behind a vacancy mere grains of sand creating designing my inner zen garden AP: 3rd place 2020 Posted on December 26, 2018

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 12/27/2018 5:36:00 PM

My 'thought bubbles' escape far too much, like your description of trying to gather the fragments to create your garden!

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/27/2018 9:16:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Michelle.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/26/2018 10:06:00 PM

Your free verse style is so filled with stimulating images these days. Each line adds more and more to those bubbles. It all makes for very enjoyable reader experiences. Thank you for penning such wondrous lines. Best always, Gershon

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/26/2018 10:44:00 PM

Thank you for your wonderful visit and compliment, Gershon.

Bernard Chan

Date: 12/26/2018 7:36:00 PM

An inner zen garden would be the ultimate prize. Very nice, Line. Happy holidays!

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/26/2018 9:13:00 PM

Thank you so much, Bernard, for your lovely visit and comment.