Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

Drifting

thoughts
bubbles
escaping
gone from my head

evaporated
dissipated
vanishing
into thin air
discharged
detonated
leaving
a void behind
a vacancy
mere grains of sand

creating
designing
my inner zen garden 



AP: 3rd place 2020

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Michelle Faulkner December 27, 2018 at 5:36 PM My 'thought bubbles' escape far too much, like your description of trying to gather the fragments to create your garden! Line Gauthier December 27, 2018 at 9:16 PM Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Michelle.

Gershon Wolf December 26, 2018 at 10:06 PM Your free verse style is so filled with stimulating images these days. Each line adds more and more to those bubbles. It all makes for very enjoyable reader experiences. Thank you for penning such wondrous lines. Best always, Gershon Line Gauthier December 26, 2018 at 10:44 PM Thank you for your wonderful visit and compliment, Gershon.

Bernard Chan December 26, 2018 at 7:36 PM An inner zen garden would be the ultimate prize. Very nice, Line. Happy holidays! Line Gauthier December 26, 2018 at 9:13 PM Thank you so much, Bernard, for your lovely visit and comment.