Notes About The Poem

Image result for driftwood on beach

drifted

Soft

A space

Between the

Spaces where I find

You, breathless ... broken

Bare and beautied

Upon your reef

I am bound

In ruin.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Horne Avatar
August 26, 2017 at 2:24 PM
lovely romantic write
Barden Avatar
August 26, 2017 at 3:45 PM
Thank you, Jack - much appreciated!
Parker Avatar
August 26, 2017 at 11:49 AM
I'm going to quietly close the door and leave you two alone...
Barden Avatar
August 26, 2017 at 3:44 PM
LOL - no worries, Frederick! ;-)
Allison Avatar
August 26, 2017 at 3:45 AM
Phwoar you are on fire here with this sensual poem which got my senses tingling Greg:-) Fabulous poetry!:-) hugs jan xx
Barden Avatar
August 26, 2017 at 3:42 PM
Thank you so much, Jan, I was hoping it might have that affect on folks ... I'm very pleased you liked it! :-)
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