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Dried Wax

The flame's aglow; the wick will burn Light warms the room so one will turn Toward the blaze that shines so bright It calms the soul this torrid night You gaze upon the dancing flame But what you don't know is quite a shame For what lights the flame that heats the air Lies underneath that flickering flare The fire shall burn, there is no doubt But what is left when that flame is out? No longer, then, shall the light persist And the ignored dried wax shall still exist Edited with help from Michael Jones

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Date: 10/6/2017 11:23:00 AM
A very beautiful written poem, I really like the way you ve written it, the rhyme was great and it was an enjoyable read, welcome to poeteysoup
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Date: 10/6/2017 12:58:00 AM
Great rhyme. Especially all the alliteration in the second stanza is wonderful. Welcome to PoetrySoup :)
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