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Drenching Origami Wings

A forehead wrinkles at the pounding of water from the sky It kind of wishes that it could d r o w n out thoughts and feelings but it only serves to m a g n i f y them background droll music to an overthinker's mundane life a fold here, a crease there origami wings that are limp, drenched looking pretty lonely and pathetic under, that, crying, sky, , , , , , , ,

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/15/2015 9:11:00 AM
Missy! Missy was here ;) hope your week is a blessed one.. miss you *mwahugs*
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Date: 9/2/2015 12:30:00 AM
thanks so much for visiting my poem today, sweetie. I left a note over there about which "child" I was in that picture!! You can't guess? heehee. Luv ya!!
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Date: 8/21/2015 10:32:00 PM
Buko was hard to take for some but a lot of us saw his pain, his rebellion and his genius as a pie baked into perfection. I admire his talent, and I write nothing like him but his style and depth is unusual and interesting as hell. The man so very often wrote the cold hard brutal truth.
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Date: 7/30/2015 5:31:00 PM
Hey Nikko it's been a very long time my friend, many tides have come and gone since we last spoke and as always you never fail to mesmerise me with your words. I hope you and your family are well...David
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Date: 7/27/2015 11:33:00 AM
Oh MY WORD!! Why do I only see this gem now? You have the talent to make this look so easy Missy ;) needless to say I love it! How are you? I am glad you still find my ramblings appealing lol Ps: Busy Missy miss Mushroom Missy *mwah*
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Date: 7/10/2015 1:10:00 PM
Thanks for reading my blog and commenting ... Love this poem of yours . Bev
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Date: 7/8/2015 6:10:00 PM
Oh dear, Nikko !! You have always had a way with your poems that make me want to know if there is more behind the story. I have missed seeing you post your poems, and have neglected to see you here. So glad I found this...and hope all is well. Sending big hugs to you dear one!
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Date: 7/7/2015 12:28:00 PM
Nicely done Wala Na. Nice to find your poetry and thank you for reading and commenting. Love, J oyce
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Date: 7/3/2015 5:45:00 PM
A somewhat surreal over the edge mixture of emotions that speak of discontentment within the author's heart. Well written. Emile. #7
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Date: 7/3/2015 1:52:00 PM
wow, Nikko, this is stunning! You are at your best when writing this way. I am gonna wait till later to answer your email. I am not seeing Graceland as I had hoped. (what else is new?) Joe is feeling sick with a cold he caught here and I am just enjoying soup and trying to write poems on my last day here. We will leave in the morning. Take that plane home from Nashville in the afternoon. I hope Snickers and my cat are ok. Luv ya,Andrea
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Date: 6/30/2015 4:30:00 PM
Nikko!!! So this I you? How are you dear friend? I saw your comment on my latest blog and I keep forgetting you have changed your profile name. If I had known that was you I would have replied with much than an idiotic 'thanks"...My only excuse is that I'm getting OLD and forgetful...SO glad to see you posting again and oh my, you are off to a flying re-start. What a poem! More please...
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Date: 6/28/2015 10:00:00 AM
Our dearest friend, Linda is right my very dear friend, Nikko. You're an amazing poet. I'm so glad to read this priceless gems of yours tonight. This superb write tells me, meron at meron pa at maraming-marami pa and not "wala na". Thank you so much for sharing and for everything! So sorry if I only came here now . Again thank you so much for this poem. Have a great wkend! love lots and biggest hug, Leonora
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Date: 6/17/2015 10:47:00 AM
you are amazing Nikko, the imagery speaks volume.. The title's one of the best I've ever seen. I like the fold here crease there imagery. Love LINDA
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Date: 6/9/2015 9:20:00 AM
This is a facinating write and very unique... It draws out our thoughts.... It sings to us.
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Date: 6/5/2015 2:33:00 PM
wow, nikks... aside from the shape of this verse, the pensive outflow of your deep thoughts just get me... sweetly wrenching... ang galeng naman!.. how are you?.. huggs
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Date: 6/5/2015 11:48:00 AM
Hey you!!! This is so beautiful. I loved the title...and the poem did not disappoint. So good to see you posting. :) Hugs
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