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Drear Year - Bt

Christmas comes soon; it will pass- bring New Year- first class! May this new start hold great bliss- the past year dismiss. Covid please go; with hope, mid-spring- please, vaccine rid. And bring sweet peace; help us cling fast- with new hope, sing! December 7, 2020 Contest: Bauk Than – Than Bauk Sponsor: Charles Messina
Rules: 3 lines per stanza: 4 syllables per line Rhyme 2nd syllable line 1 with 3rd syllable line 2 with 4th syllable line 3 (reverse of Than-Bauk form)

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Date: 2/17/2021 5:04:00 AM
Oh how we were all glad to be past 2020 even if it did not bring the end to covid, but it did end the beginning. Congratulations, Sandra!
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Date: 2/16/2021 2:28:00 AM
Congrats on your expanded winner. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 2/15/2021 9:25:00 PM
Excellent Sandra. Congrats on your 1st place win!
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Date: 12/9/2020 2:26:00 PM
Nice flow and a good thing to wish for this Christmas, Sandra. Best wishes in the contest ~ John
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Date: 12/9/2020 3:31:00 AM
This looks like a winner to me, very well constructed and I like the spaces between the verses. Merry Christmas and best of luck.
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