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Dreamy Visions-Collab With Jo

Limpid sprinting waters of burbling brooks Rows of flamboyant and swishing dark green pines Embellished with glowing verdure on sidelines Tender and flushed buds aglow with rich looks The dense clouds have descended on the earth Little fluffy white wisps of dreamy visions Natural splendour with divine collisions What a splendid mountain view, beyond worth! Craggy hillocks covered with the snow quark "A thing of beauty is a joy forever!" Hark back locale to recall for whomever A lovely photograph of nature park! Placed : 1st Collab with Jo Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joanna Daniel Date: 01-05-2023 Syllable count: 10.11.11.10

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Date: 5/3/2023 6:32:00 AM
A sweet pastoral write Patri. Great collaboration. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 5/4/2023 1:33:00 AM
Thank you so much for the best compliments.
Date: 5/2/2023 9:56:00 AM
Dynamic, flowing energy Patri! A seamless collaboration indeed! Congratulations!
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 5/4/2023 1:32:00 AM
Thanks a lot for the best compliments.
Date: 5/2/2023 1:20:00 AM
That Keats' line clinched it for you, Patri, love how you incorporated it into your poem:) congratulations on your top win:) enjoyed our collab:)
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 5/4/2023 1:32:00 AM
Thank you so much for the compliments. My tributes to the great poet.

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