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Heaven’s delight Brownies supreme Whip up a bowl Of peaches and cream Reach for the sky Launch a sweet dream Hang all your hope bubbles Across a cherry moonbeam AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on November 16, 2019 for contest McWHIRTLE ME POETRY sponsored by CHARLES MESSINA - RANKED 3RD

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Date: 12/26/2019 2:37:00 PM
what a sweet poem in so many ways Line, Many congratulations on your win, I hope you had a wonderful Christmas:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/26/2019 9:54:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jan. Most appreciated.
Date: 12/24/2019 12:19:00 PM
You made me hungry, Line (lol) A joyful poem indeed. Congratulations on your win. Happy Holidays to you and your family. Hugs Charlie
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Date: 12/26/2019 9:55:00 PM
Thank you so much, Charlie. Most appreciated.
Date: 11/18/2019 2:43:00 PM
I do love this one more every time i read it, getting more hungry by the second.
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Date: 11/18/2019 3:33:00 PM
Go for it, Caren.
Date: 11/17/2019 1:42:00 PM
I was wanting to finish off saying moonbeam pie!! But I think it's called Moon pie! SWEET one.
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Date: 11/18/2019 3:34:00 PM
Either way, sounds yummy.Thanks, Andrea.
Date: 11/16/2019 10:46:00 PM
Sounds yummy, a dream come true! G.L. in the contest, Line! :) g
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/16/2019 10:48:00 PM
Thanks, Gershon. Most appreciated.
Date: 11/16/2019 5:39:00 PM
sounds very tasty, whirtle me in.
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Date: 11/16/2019 7:46:00 PM
Absolutely, Pixie.
Date: 11/16/2019 11:10:00 AM
Hi Line, Reading this was such a delight! I wish you best of luck in the contest. Have a great weekend:-) Alexis
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/16/2019 7:46:00 PM
Thanks, Alexis, for your lovely visit and compliment.
Date: 11/16/2019 8:02:00 AM
lovely Line... great flow... hugs :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/16/2019 8:50:00 AM
Thanks, Sandra. Much appreciated.
Date: 11/16/2019 5:28:00 AM
I have to say I am liking these McWhirtles. This is great. Fun and flows well.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/16/2019 8:49:00 AM
Thank you, Midnight.
Date: 11/16/2019 5:01:00 AM
sounds yummy, you did this very well..
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/16/2019 8:49:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, SO.
Date: 11/16/2019 1:22:00 AM
Nice one Line. I like how it flowed easily. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/16/2019 8:50:00 AM
Thanks, Gregory. Much appreciated.

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