Line Gauthier Poet McWhirtle

Dreamy

Heaven’s delight
Brownies supreme
Whip up a bowl
Of peaches and cream

Reach for the sky
Launch a sweet dream
Hang all your hope bubbles
Across a cherry moonbeam



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

Submitted on November 16, 2019 for contest McWHIRTLE ME POETRY sponsored by CHARLES MESSINA  -  RANKED 3RD

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Jan Allison December 26, 2019 at 2:37 PM what a sweet poem in so many ways Line, Many congratulations on your win, I hope you had a wonderful Christmas:-) hugs Jan xx Line Gauthier December 26, 2019 at 9:54 PM Thank you so much, Jan. Most appreciated.

Charles Messina December 24, 2019 at 12:19 PM You made me hungry, Line (lol) A joyful poem indeed. Congratulations on your win. Happy Holidays to you and your family. Hugs Charlie Line Gauthier December 26, 2019 at 9:55 PM Thank you so much, Charlie. Most appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger November 18, 2019 at 2:43 PM I do love this one more every time i read it, getting more hungry by the second. Line Gauthier November 18, 2019 at 3:33 PM Go for it, Caren.

Andrea Dietrich November 17, 2019 at 1:42 PM I was wanting to finish off saying moonbeam pie!! But I think it's called Moon pie! SWEET one. Line Gauthier November 18, 2019 at 3:34 PM Either way, sounds yummy.Thanks, Andrea.

Gershon Wolf November 16, 2019 at 10:46 PM Sounds yummy, a dream come true! G.L. in the contest, Line! :) g Line Gauthier November 16, 2019 at 10:48 PM Thanks, Gershon. Most appreciated.

Mystic Rose Rose November 16, 2019 at 5:39 PM sounds very tasty, whirtle me in. Line Gauthier November 16, 2019 at 7:46 PM Absolutely, Pixie.

Alexis Y. November 16, 2019 at 11:10 AM Hi Line, Reading this was such a delight! I wish you best of luck in the contest. Have a great weekend:-) Alexis Line Gauthier November 16, 2019 at 7:46 PM Thanks, Alexis, for your lovely visit and compliment.

Sandra Adams November 16, 2019 at 8:02 AM lovely Line... great flow... hugs :) Line Gauthier November 16, 2019 at 8:50 AM Thanks, Sandra. Much appreciated.

Midnight Aurora November 16, 2019 at 5:28 AM I have to say I am liking these McWhirtles. This is great. Fun and flows well. Line Gauthier November 16, 2019 at 8:49 AM Thank you, Midnight.

Silent One November 16, 2019 at 5:01 AM sounds yummy, you did this very well.. Line Gauthier November 16, 2019 at 8:49 AM Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, SO.

Na Na November 16, 2019 at 1:22 AM Nice one Line. I like how it flowed easily. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest Line Gauthier November 16, 2019 at 8:50 AM Thanks, Gregory. Much appreciated.