Dreamtime

Longing for the rainforest,
the smell of life eternal springs 
and wafts across the oceans deep
to my chilly home to bring..

images of orchards bright
in high trees with roots a dangling
of butterflies, I've never seen
and crocodiles prey wrangling.

Longing for the forest in spring
the eastern coast of Australia,
the gushing falls high above all
Kingfishers dressed in regalia.

I dream of Daintree and sky walks 
above the forest's fecund floor
of mangrove trees riverside,
rousing morning doves galore.. 

Ghadja I, ghost spirit white,
I dream of Australian spring time
far across the deepest sea
down under I walk in dreamtime.


*In the animist framework of Australian Aboriginal mythology,
 Dreamtime is a sacred era in which ancestral totemic spirit beings
 created the world.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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O'Leary Avatar
September 11, 2012 at 9:54 AM
Wow... it sounds like the spirits did a good job! Nice poem... Terry
Merryman Avatar
September 6, 2012 at 6:49 PM
A fabulous write, Debbie! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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September 6, 2012 at 11:25 AM
Congratulations, Debbie on your super win in Tracie's contest, " Spring in Australia ". You are right, we are the only ones writing about Australia. I adore the way you tell your story. Your poetry describes Australia in its actuality: beautiful and wild...as you take us with you on that wonderful journey. Thanks for your encouraging comments. Have a great weekend. Love, Andrew.
A   Avatar
September 5, 2012 at 7:54 PM
DEBBIE, congratulations with your xool poem in Tracie's "SPRING" contest.. always :-) PD
Brown Avatar
September 5, 2012 at 5:46 AM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Spring Is In The Air" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
September 3, 2012 at 2:21 PM
debbie, what a tapestry of imagery... So thought provoking... special congrats!... :) huggs!
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September 3, 2012 at 5:51 AM
Congratulations Debbie, makes me homesick and I've never been xx
Horsman Avatar
September 1, 2012 at 5:15 AM
wonderful Debbie, having lived there for 8 years, i yearn again, after reading this, love the last line of the poem, a beautiful finale
Goff Avatar
August 31, 2012 at 7:16 PM
Oh!....paragraph 5 line 1.... fave!
Goff Avatar
August 31, 2012 at 7:13 PM
Deb...I too believe in "dreamtime" as Aboriginies in Aussie believe....&know own a bunch of bullroarers and 'rangs from my brothers down under...but can't seem to get the circular breathing deal down on how to blow my didgeridoo....cool poem! Jimbo
Pettit Avatar
August 31, 2012 at 3:04 PM
This is superbly written with descriptiveness I could have never conjured. I believe you have an edge in the contest with this entry.
Dietrich Avatar
August 31, 2012 at 12:46 PM
BEAUTIFUL one on the spring of Australia. I hope our poems did not have to specifically target Australia's springtime, but if that is what she is looking for, I think she would find the best one of all is yours right here.
Ellison Avatar
August 31, 2012 at 8:12 AM
On another poetry site, I got to know more than a few Australians... they are a special breed living in a beautiful land! This is extremely well written, Debbie... love and hugs, Jack
La France Avatar
August 31, 2012 at 7:58 AM
This poem is truly so visual and beautiful, you are a wonderful writer and I want to thank you Debbie for honouring my poem, Embrace the Cross in your Bi-lingual Contest. Love Constance
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