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Dreamscape

I walk in the forest of dreams; the colours vibrant, the birdsong melodious. The sun warm as it twinkles through the rustling leaves. Discontentment crushed underfoot. It is so beautiful. I bathe in a river of love. The gentle water lapping at the edge of my emotions, and trickling refreshingly to my heart. It cleanses me - soul deep. I float again. I stare at a sky of hope. It is clear and blue. Its celestial beauty obliterates hopelessness as it casts its assured confidence on my doubting, flailing spirit. It is renewed again. I walk in a forest of dreams. I live with a dream of hope. I swim with creatures of contentment and am buoyant on a wave of expectancy. God, if you're there let this illusion become reality.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 8/25/2008 9:15:00 AM
So my dear Helen, very soon, it will come to pass I love this deep reflection of introspection and in it what will prevai, take care Ms Helen, and keep the faith, for God is never slow exacting his promises, take care D-nyce
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Date: 7/13/2008 5:00:00 AM
This was an uplifting write. The imagery was beautiful. Vince
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Date: 6/27/2008 5:47:00 AM
A beautiful uplifting dream. The symbol of hope and beauty as compared to the miracles of nature is outstanding. A Dreamscape indeed. So excellent. Love, Shar
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