Dreamscape

I walk in the forest of dreams;
the colours vibrant, the birdsong 
melodious. The sun warm as it 
twinkles through the rustling leaves. 
Discontentment crushed underfoot. 
It is so beautiful. 

I bathe in a river of love. 
The gentle water lapping 
at the edge of my emotions, 
and trickling refreshingly 
to my heart.  It cleanses me - 
soul deep. I float again. 

I stare at a sky of hope. 
It is clear and blue. 
Its celestial beauty obliterates 
hopelessness as it casts its 
assured confidence on my doubting, 
flailing spirit. It is renewed again. 

I walk in a forest of dreams. 
I live with a dream of hope. 
I swim with creatures of contentment 
and am buoyant on a wave of 
expectancy. God, if you're there 
let this illusion become reality.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 8/25/2008 9:15:00 AM
So my dear Helen, very soon, it will come to pass I love this deep reflection of introspection and in it what will prevai, take care Ms Helen, and keep the faith, for God is never slow exacting his promises, take care D-nyce
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Date: 7/13/2008 5:00:00 AM
This was an uplifting write. The imagery was beautiful. Vince
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Date: 6/27/2008 5:47:00 AM
A beautiful uplifting dream. The symbol of hope and beauty as compared to the miracles of nature is outstanding. A Dreamscape indeed. So excellent. Love, Shar
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