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Dreams To Run With You

Sweet Magic moon So how are you today? Spellbound me with your smile I cannot take off my eyes Showering your gold dust all over my crumpled room Still I can remember how my mom rocked me in her lap Showing your beaming smile high in the sky Singing her moon songs I favor so much Struggled to keep my eyes fixed at you serene smile Shined with your beams I used to run all over our compound Screamed gleefully when I saw you too were pacing with me Sometimes your face was hidden with thick wooly packs Searched all over with tears, for my playmate I couldn't catch So young and fresh, you look gorgeous Magic moon, but Striding in this long march, now I am feeble, not young anymore Strive hard to keep steady when I drag my feet in my walker, Small girl living in my heart dreams to run with you even though

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Cherie Thomas

Date: 8/11/2013 2:08:00 PM

Lovely & well written poem manel,,, I love how the moon follows us were ever we go:) you capture it's beauty so well though the, cycle.of life. Ty4sharing cherie...bless.up

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/29/2013 11:09:00 AM

This is very cool, I like how you started all the lines with S, an excellent piece you have penned.

Manel Gunatillake
Date: 7/29/2013 12:09:00 PM

Thank you

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 7/29/2013 9:44:00 AM

This is very nice and I really enjoyed it very much. There is something magic about the moon. Thanks for sharing...... Lucilla

Manel Gunatillake
Date: 7/29/2013 10:54:00 AM

Thank You dearest

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 7/29/2013 1:40:00 AM

Excellent. Well imagery write. Beautiful. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

Manel Gunatillake
Date: 7/29/2013 9:39:00 AM

thank you Ravi

Donna Jones

Date: 7/28/2013 9:31:00 PM

I enjoyed this too....people everywhere see the same moon and share its wonder nd magic.in a way it connects us all .. lovely poem

Manel Gunatillake
Date: 7/29/2013 9:40:00 AM

Thank you donna. yes the moon gives a serene feeling to me.

April Gabriella

Date: 7/28/2013 4:06:00 PM

Oh this is such a lovely piece. Wonderful imagery and tone. Very nice.

Manel Gunatillake
Date: 7/28/2013 8:54:00 PM

Thank you April

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/28/2013 9:23:00 AM

Good morning Manel, beautiful, i like the words Magic Moon'. very pleasing. love the showering image you share... thank you very much... always~ Linda

Manel Gunatillake
Date: 7/28/2013 8:54:00 PM

Thank you PD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/28/2013 7:09:00 AM

this is precious!!! From babyhood to adulthood and beyond, the moon is always there. It's a really nice poem.

Manel Gunatillake
Date: 7/28/2013 8:53:00 PM

Thank You Andrea